Reviews for Symbiotic
MacieHeart'sCasey chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
I adore this story so much! Its so beautiful and bittersweet, lost for words.
HlorkexD chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Well... Hum... I don't know what to say actually O.o

This was... just... wow!
Youndime16 chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
that was short
rallybabe89 chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
u started off saying tha naruto never saw that sasuke returned. then you say that sakura helped heal sasuke but after naruto died she stopped trying to get sasuke to talk. hows that if naruto died b4 sasuke came back to the village or did naruto die after a state of unconsciousness? o and in one of the lines you repeat the word 'you' twice. "and you since you seem to have no interest in an eye substitute"

the rest is good. its written very nicely. Although its a bit sad i still like it.
Maika08 chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
hey! i love this story it is touching, moving and heartbreaking {in a way} it disturbed me a little that the uchiha didn't have an eye, but in the end the story is realistic and very mature, and acceptable. I want to request that you write a sequel{plz plz plzplzp } and give you some suggestions; it could be about sasukes and sakuras struggles to maintain their relationship in society and public. and they could get married and have kids n raise them...it'll be ver fitting! :D i hope you do write the sequel! props on this one!
youdon'twantotoknow chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Good job, but you do realize that Sasuke did get his eye back, didn't you? It was only Tsukuyomi. SPOILER! yeah, that was a spoiler, I just realized. Good job, even though the dobe is annoying, he's comic relief. Everyone needs that.

Ydwtk
Laura-chan chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Fascinating and IC I like how you described Sakura's feelings.
GaaraFox chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
Absolutely beautiful... and you even kept BOTH of them in character! Now that's not only difficult, but rare to come upon. Excellent work.
DarkAngelRakell chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
wow you should do like a sequel where how sasuke sees it from his point of view or something? But i love it as a one shot too
taffyz chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
aw, so saad, but i geuss that's just life. story is interesting.. :D
banreal chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
I love the poignant bittersweet tone of this story. It was beautiful!