|Reviews for Togu's Daughter|
| Umetsuko Haruka chapter 16 . 12/9/2012
UPDATE PLEASE! this story is terrific it's a wonderfull story! i love it! (_)
| Bevtan888 chapter 14 . 5/2/2010
| Electric Candlelight chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
This is okay, but the prose seems to run on and become choppy at random intervals. For instance, "Setsuko shuffled around in her room with her monogrammed tie around her neck and the especially made uniform skirt lopsided and pieces of her hair falling out of her ponytail, which she tied with a red ribbon." was difficult for me to understand and I had to read it twice. I think that your general writing style would benefit from breaking things like that up into two sentences or using something along the lines of a semi-colon. Overall, this is a fairly good story. Keep up the good work. :)
| completeandtotalrandomness chapter 11 . 10/4/2009
amazing! this is a great outlook on her feelings! i can feel her pain :)
| AvedlyTres chapter 2 . 9/19/2009
I've been looking for a catching GAC story and I have to say good job!
I like your character, she fits in the GAC and isn't the foofoo, overly goody goody type seems to appear when people make up their own OC's.
Good Job and Good luck!
| Ice-creamy-life chapter 10 . 9/8/2009
I like your style of writing! I like the storyline too
| completeandtotalrandomness chapter 10 . 8/29/2009
wow! this is really getting intense!
| completeandtotalrandomness chapter 9 . 2/17/2009
i was chuckling the entire time i was reading this. i can't wait for more!
| obliviovsly chapter 6 . 7/5/2008
I really like this story. _ DON'T TELL ME THAT IT'S DONE. PLEASE. Keep writing :3 You're really good
| Colormyworld chapter 6 . 6/21/2008
Wowfun story! I love the cliffhangers...looking forward to an update _
| Imperfection.Butterfly chapter 5 . 5/25/2008
| Imperfection.Butterfly chapter 4 . 5/4/2008
teheheh nice nice! _
| I'm A PureEvil chapter 4 . 4/14/2008
I love it!
I really want Takanari to talk with Setsunko! they could have a really intresting conversations...
Well, I hope you update soon!
| Imperfection.Butterfly chapter 3 . 3/18/2008
hahhaaha at the end, so cute! I wonder what's gonna happen between Setsuko and Ryuunosuke
| Imperfection.Butterfly chapter 2 . 3/12/2008
gahh! keep writin! i also want to know this koutei is!