|Reviews for Watching You, Wanting You|
| Remus over Sirius chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
that was yummy, especially towards the ending (naturally)
| Marauder's Mad chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
Wonderful story, so moving, deep and well-written ! I loved it.
| rekahneko chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
I love hearing the internal thoughts of Remus.
| MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
That was so beautiful. Your attention to detail is remarkable! My only complaint is that when it started to get sexy you stopped it. :( Still, I loved it!
| Seeingitmyway chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
This story is amazing, i love your style. Very good.
Write some more Remus and Sirius K? You got it down.
| 2Padfoot00Moony7 chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Wow... just wow!
That was really good, your writing is incredible!
Cute too ... just like Rem to worry about scars.
| Ravenna Archambault chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
i adore this. your descriptions are absolutely beautiful, and that's not any exagguration. you've used all the senses in a variety of ways without even being very specific as to any form of plotline or anything like that (though, of course, that means it can't become anything more than a one-shot, which would've been nice to see).
The only thing that gets a tad ... *odd* sometimes is your varied ways of showing dialogue, for example "It’s alright, Moony" and "Stop, Sirius, don’t look", both of which do not have quotation marks.
Also, before I go: why would the rat (presumably Peter) go wild on Sirius' shoelaces? Or was that a reference to something?
| Charlotte Lazarus chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
why, oh why, did u stop there? I was so mesmerized by what was going on and u just suddenly stop. u kill me, really, so update soon! i think u have a wonderful narrative! soon please!