|Reviews for Wade|
| Grumpycat chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
This chapter contains repeated swings back and forth between past tense and present tense. Since it appears to be written about the past, it would be best to rewrite the chapter so that everything is past tense except for things which continue to be true in the present.
Exclamation points should be used sparingly. Looks amateurish. The use of the word "suddenly" usually gets you a slap on the wrist from a creative writing teacher.
The premise of the chapter is faulty: lots of house slaves in the South were nannies. Lots of touching. "Sliders" did try to maintain plausibility of plot, at least for the first two seasons.
I'd delete this story and try again. Watch the verb tenses.
| the stargate time traveller chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
its an interesting possibility.
| Stellarsong chapter 2 . 10/27/2009
I could definately see this as a real episode, it's very good. Keep writing.
| novashanti chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
please continue. I want to see how they're going to get Remmy out of this one.
| RLS83843 chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
The South wasn't that cruel until after the War.
| Nilicat chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Great chapter! Update soon please, I wanna know what happens next!