|Reviews for Coming of age|
| Viridis73 chapter 3 . 3/24/2009
I liked the whole story, i.e. Rite of Passage, however, I am a sucker for EPOV.
| snoogum chapter 3 . 3/16/2009
its as good as the story it self but you should write more especially the part where she losses her baby what was he thinking at that time
| ash902 chapter 3 . 3/6/2009
I realy enjoyed reading Edwards POV...it appears you haven't written in quite sometime, but if you ever decide to start again, I and I am sure others would like to read about his POV regarding the miscarriage. You wrote Bella's view of it so poignantly and I was curious what was going through his mind when the girls called for help, when they drove to the hospital, when the news was broke, etc.
| daydreamreader chapter 3 . 1/20/2009
again, so so damn good!
i switch off so many times when i see a poo POV where his pov is the same as her's but the "he said" are simply changed to "she said" but you really worked on it and make it a whole, different character, as promised.
| egall3 chapter 3 . 1/10/2009
please continue in edwards perspective!
| overzealousbunny chapter 3 . 1/10/2009
This time I wasn’t going to let go
love LOVE that line.. edwards povs are perfect.
| babbles chapter 3 . 12/6/2008
| ajdflakjhsdflakjds chapter 3 . 11/30/2008
i love this seris! please continue in edwards perspective!
| edwardluver96 chapter 3 . 11/30/2008
luved it keep riten
| NoLongerWritingFF chapter 3 . 11/25/2008
LOL it was great to see what he was thinking!
| NoLongerWritingFF chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
WOW! This looks real good I cant wait to read more! :)
| Bia chapter 3 . 11/17/2008
It's really nice to read what Edward has been feeling. It makes the story looks like more complete. Please more chapters from EPOV. Update!
| monomo chapter 3 . 10/29/2008
update update update!
| twilight-girl1212 chapter 3 . 10/12/2008
that was nice to read from Edward's point of view! pretty cool...are you going to write more chapters from his p.o.v.?
| Britt01 chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
"Like being afraid of dying and killing yourself instead." Okay, this might be one of the best lines ever.