|Reviews for Coming of age|
| Angelznight3000 chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Whoa. That was good.
| Emily A. Sterling chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
I Love it could you do chapter 12 and then also 15 maybe?
| EclipseoftheTwilightMoon chapter 3 . 5/18/2008
Seeing Edward's POV was very interesting. Great work.
| sanctuary-in-dreams chapter 3 . 5/10/2008
OK, this was the biggest Eddie turn on of my life. He's so SWEET! (NAA-NA-NA-NAA-NA-NA-NA-NA-NA-NAA-NAA! ...Sorry, it's a song.)
Once again, I loves reading in Eddie POV. Update soon!
| sanctuary-in-dreams chapter 2 . 5/10/2008
This is so damn fun to hear from Eddie's POV. Who knew what was going on in that sexy mind of his? ...Well, you, but whatever!
| sanctuary-in-dreams chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Woah...I didn't know Eddie was so...DEEP. Never judge a book by its cover...though,that's what I do to get a good book...
SCHEREZADE! I played that in orchestra! ...Sorry, but I am a spazz like that.
| xtina-chan chapter 3 . 5/6/2008
I love that you wrote this from Edward's POV. Very nicely done. You should write one of the next chapter as well, when he walks around school and sees Bella wearing the shirt.. that was an awesome chapter and would be great to see from his side. much love goes out to you!
| Muggle-Born-Witch and Proud chapter 3 . 4/27/2008
Greatness thus far. I like his take on things, its really awesome!
| JustAGirl101 chapter 3 . 4/26/2008
i love the Edward pov lol
| FakeBaconFryer chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
I LUV IT WHEN MEN SWALLOW THEIR PRIDE!
| MartaSwan chapter 3 . 3/25/2008
omg this story was so good, but a little cynical. i read first the sequel and then this, and they're both wonderful, even if bella is way too cynical and manly, while edward is a little too "i'm a victin". but this was one of the most original stories i've ever read. can i ask how old are you? because by the way you write you must be at least 18 or more, but i'm probably wrong.
| Simply Emma chapter 3 . 3/21/2008
love it cant wait for the next chapter
| sweetswirlypop chapter 3 . 3/19/2008
Aw. This chapter was moving. Emmett is so sweet, fighting for Bella. And what Edward did at the end was ingenious.
| abercrombiegrl15 chapter 3 . 3/18/2008
luv it! please write more
| 1stepbehind29 chapter 3 . 3/18/2008
update update update!
how about some chapters from the sequel?