|Reviews for Officer Material|
| Lela chapter 1 . 9/8/2020
I love that you posted this to ffnet after having it originally published in 1984 (!) I love this as a possible introduction between Spock and Pike. I like that you incorporated Star Fleet’s blatant xenophobia and political bureaucracy into it.
| Sally chapter 1 . 11/2/2019
Just another great Pike and Spock story worth reading again!
| gemhornet chapter 1 . 7/31/2018
| KendrixTermina chapter 1 . 10/15/2016
Great Idea in many respects. Interesting to see what would be the start of what was evidently a strong bond.
| Gwen chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
This is a great story, nicely plotted.
| WeirdLittleStories chapter 1 . 5/31/2015
Sorry to hear that Starfleet Academy is so xenophobic and so sensitive to political pressure, but glad that Spock has a champion in Pike. This story does help to explain the strength of Spock's motivation for the events of "The Menagerie."
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2015
Excellent story. Thanks.
| TOSoldtimer chapter 1 . 3/30/2015
Still rereading - while I wait for the snow to melt. There's still nearly a foot of the white menace in my front yard. I've always thought this was one of your best short stories. What an insight into why Spock felt he owed Pike, and held him in such high regard. And by the way, I really am an old timer. I read it first in Masiform D. Much more convenient to
Read on the iPhone, but I do miss the illos.
| Linvalay chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
loved this as well! Pardon me while i continue to make my way through your stories.
| ritratkitkat chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I love this and I am now very curious to read other stories of yours. Exceptional idea, exceptionally written.
| bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Go, Spock, go. Brilliant. Thanks for the read.
| PBIceCream chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
That was superb! We definitely need more Captain Pike stories, thank you.
| Lori Jean chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
This was a cool story, thanks.
| Indygodusk chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Aw, yay for a Spock champion! That was very nicely written and fun to read. I totally empathized with both Pike and Spock during this. Thank you.
| rosebudmelissa chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I feel that young Spock may have been slightly OOC, but it was a well-written story of his younger days and a pleasant read.