Reviews for Waiting
Strifegirl chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
excellent job! _ I loved it! x3 I also felt butterflies on my stomach xDDD great fic :3 please write more like this _ I don't mind reading LONG One-shots xDDD
cheeriolord chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
hey ho just read another of your wondeful cloti fics :) i think you definetely got the right mood you where aiming for here and your portrayal of cloud is excellent although ido prefer fics where he becomes alittle less reclusive by the end this one is more realistic to his character.

thanks

rob
PeAceLovEr 12 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
its nice together with Vince/Yuff, but i hope you didn't put Rude in it
xandria chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
Well done, as usual! Thanks for the enjoyable read! :-)
ObsessiveCompulsiveValkyrie chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Okay, so I said I'd check out your Zack/Tifa... Then I came across Cloud/Tifa, which is even better _

I thought this was really cool (Despite the Vincent/Yuffie). I like how the kids (as always) are stepping in and giving them the shove they need. Getting caught in the rainstorm was a cute addition, though I was expecting Cloud to initiate the lip-action. I suppose it works either way. They're both shy and timid in each other's pressence (Well, not anymore...), so I'm happy. The only thing I really found weird is that you ended a Cloud/Tifa on a Vincent/Yuffie note. That seems odd to me. I'm demanding a sequel young lady-who's-probably-older-than-me! Now! ...After the next chapter of LG :P

Cheers and good luck to a new school year! (Gag.)

-Valk
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
UWE HE HE, THIS WAS PERFECT, HAVE YOU MADE A SEQUEL TO THIS, I'M GONNA CHECK NOW,
mom calling chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Hooray for a good Cloti! You did just fine-I enjoyed it all very much! Mas, mas, por favor... thx mc
scienceguy chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
Good story. Great balance between fluff and humor.
GoneCloseExit chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
cute
Marisa chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
I love Denzel's nickname: Denny. That is just too cute!

Okay Tifa. What the hell were you thinking when you kissed Rude? UGH! I'm glad she refused him though.

I think Cloud is just too adorable when he's shy. I liked the image of seeing them running back in the rain and stopping every once in awhile to kiss.

And the scene on the couch was sweet.

A very nice story, especially with Yuffie and Vinnie. I think they're cute together, too.
Kit-Kat-Wafer chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
:D
DragonGirl323 chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
Aw, this was very loverly! :] Good job! You did beautifully!

Sincerely,

DragonGirl323
You Light The Sky chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
oMG! That was such a good oneshot _ Quite lovely thank you! They're all in character and really cute
Yumi Reitenshi chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
(attention Valentine'sNinja a crazy fan is reviewing, do not be afraid)

oh oh oh sequal sequal sequal! this story is just to cute to let it end like that!
Rachel chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
I really like this story i hope you add more to it i can't wait to see what happens next i hope it's something really good
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