|Reviews for Living in the Shadows|
| nayin1704 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
| AwEsOmEiZeR123 chapter 4 . 4/11/2014
I really like your story. It is amazingly written and really makes you think of all the possibilities whilst reading.
I understand that you may not be able to write for a while and considering the circumstances that is ok. Just write when you are ready and feel up to it.
My only advice to you is: Write because you want to and not because you have to. Do it because it makes you happy and not because it is a chore.
| AwEsOmEiZeR123 chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
Wow. I am loving this story. Its got a really good start, which is very important for reeling audiences in.
Feedback: please use paragraphs in the future. It is really hard to read otherwise.
I have no other comments on this other than I AM NOT CRITICISING! That is important for you and anyone else who is reading this to understand. I am merely pointing out a small problem that can be fixed with an easy solution and will help you over all.
Again I am not hating or criticising or hating, just a reader trying to help.
| slyhuff chapter 4 . 12/31/2013
hi this is such a good fic, i can tell with these first few chaps, this is going to become greater and greater. i do hope you get back to this fic as this kind of writing is so very good
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/26/2013
Okay. You say reveiws motivate you? Ok then. U r awesome! The best story ever! Your exkhusband is a complete arse for leaving you! Dont listen ta anyone who tells u different. U should be angry at him. Not the other way around. And dont be insecure. You are an amazing writer and it seems like you have a wonderfull personality. I havent seen you so i dont know what you look like but its whats in the inside that matters. Who wants to go with a beautiful looking person who has a personality like horse dung? Thats right, nokone. In my opinion its his loss noit yours. Go out, mingle have fun! Trust me, there will be someone who loves you for yiou. Wether just a bestfreind or a lover, it doesnt matter. But lovers can leave you. Best freinds stay for like so dont be sad that he has gone. Celebrate! He was a fool for leaving you. But as i said befroe, his loss, not dont be down or insecure. There is absolutley noting wrong with you. The only person to blame is your fool of a exkhusband. On a better note, i love your story, so please update. I absolutley live it.
| Potterformers chapter 4 . 12/11/2012
aw come on it been four years and you've not updated?
| mahhhfy chapter 4 . 10/5/2012
Do you have any plans to return to this story? I hope you do, because I really love it. There is one line that really stood out to me saying that I would really like where this story was going, and that was when Harry said there was blood on the letter because he was bleeding when he wrote it. I can't really explain why I liked that so much, only that it did a really great job of showing how you portray not only Harry's character, but also the relationship he'll develop with Ginny (and I'm not necessarily talking about a romantic one). I think this story has some really great possibilities, and even though it's been several years since you've updated it, I was hoping you'd be willing to return to it. It's a pretty unique story, and those are hard to come by in the world of Harry Potter fanfiction. Usually Harry gets pissed off and runs away after his sixth year, and I'd like to see where you go with it in this timeframe. That and I like that we can just skip over that whole Cho nonsense. I can also see some hints of future Ron!bashing, and I can tell you that I don't really have a problem with that, seeing as how he's a prat so far. The influence of Sirius in all of this business should also make things pretty interesting.
Those aren't the only reasons I'd like to see the story continue, but I thought that if you had some concrete proof that I like this story and believe it should continue, there you go. If there is anything else you require to get a jump start on this fic, whether it be a beta or someone to bounce ideas off of or someone to help you form a general story arc or someone to tell you it's awesome and why it's awesome, I've got it covered, just send me a message.
In case you haven't figured it out by now, I really want more of this story, and I'll just about do whatever I can to make it happen if it's at all possible. PLEASE think about it. This story needs to happen. Thanks for writing!
| Mommy3 chapter 4 . 5/16/2012
Well, I think that this is a great start to an even better story. I really hope that you do finish this. I will put this in my story alerts just in case.
| HarryGinny 4eva chapter 4 . 3/13/2012
Woooow loved it! Thanks for an amazing story! If/when you do continue (I get that you probably won't want to right now...) then please can we have lots of Hermione, Weasley and Dumbledore bashing (Hermione & Weasley bashing is mainly just for patronizing though please) :) but anyway it is a brilliant story so far, so please carry on asap! :D xxx
| nya mayaha nya chapter 4 . 10/30/2011
i love this story. can you make it so harry buys one of those magical tents that are like houses inside? PLEASEEE? and can harry buy ginny a wand?
| BreGyrl23 chapter 4 . 9/25/2011
hurry up with chapter 5 please
| ABANDONED BECAUSE OF PERVS chapter 3 . 8/12/2011
Girl you are fab and you best keep writing. that stupid ass of a man dont know what he's gonna miss. i like your sence of humur that you keep going in your characters.. now dont go die and write like your heart is on it.
| Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 4 . 1/12/2011
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
| The Weatherwitch chapter 4 . 4/8/2010
this is a great story so as soon as you can, UPDATE!
| orange cotton candy chapter 4 . 8/30/2009
nice story can't wait for the next chapter