Ash, ur muh hero bro. I never did like misty...

This was a too good fan fiction! I see very rare Pokémon

fanfictions that I fall in love with.., but this was the best

fan fiction I ever read, period. I hope that you will post

the Part 2 soon - I am really looking forward to it!

San

PS - I LOVE the way that you kept every character's

persanallity! This should become an episode!

GREAT GREAT GREAT! Please send chapter two soon! It was so cool!

Ooooooooooooooooooo! Good story! Good good good good good good good good! Please finish soon!

That was absolutely wonderful! I LOVE it! I can sincerel, truthfully say that your fanfiction was thee very best I have ever read in my entire life, whether Pokemon or any other subject/movie/band/cartoon etc. You NEED to finish the next chapter soon, because if you don't I'm going to bombard you with emails asking for more. Finally! A REAL writer!

Wow, that was good! I really enjoyed it. I'm not a big Rocketshipper, but I thought it was an excellent story! I'll be looking forward to Chapter 2. Just a suggestion: a liiittle more Twerpshipping would be good! _ Keep up the great work!

Don't worry, I'm not reviewing my own story, I just can't be bothered to put this in the author's note and all that... there IS a Chapter Two in progress, it's just taking me longer than I thought. I'll put up what I've got eventually, but no complaining that it's not finished! And it'll all have a happy ending eventually, don't worry. :)

*cries* I LOVED IT! WILL YOU CONTINUE?