Reviews for Forever
Ink Splatters 'nd Co chapter 3 . 5/4/2008
aw, I think this is such sweet idea. I hope you do more! By the way, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue your other story: What could have been. I really like it and its a great story so far!
AliceMakesMeLaugh chapter 3 . 3/23/2008
Good job with this one. This line is something I always think about Bella in New Moon:

"How could she think that?"

I mean, really, it's weird that she just believed him so easily...
AliceMakesMeLaugh chapter 2 . 3/4/2008
Hm... I think he would only keep her alive at that point to protect his family's anonymity (I don't know if that's spelled right - sorry!)

Anyway, I like it. My favorite line in this one is:

"I’m almost overpowered"

I think ALMOST is the key word - so good job :)
AliceMakesMeLaugh chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
I don't think it sucks! I'm not a good judge of poetry because I know nothing about it, but...

1. I always wondered what Edward thought about while Bella slept, and you might be 100 percent right :)

2. Very very sweet.

3. My favorite lines are:

So peaceful

So beautiful

All in all, I like it and am curious to see what Chapter 2 is...