|Reviews for Whipped Cream Goes Better On|
| AddictedReader9 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
The summary does not even begin to describe this story. The title was what interested me and I'm sure glad it did.
| 25yahoo.com chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
um...d-do you plan on writing more because if you do i promise i will love you forever...
| Saki-Hime chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Very good, who would have thought he would have a can of whipped cream in his fridge.
| Doctor.Uta chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Heh, I bet that the rocky road ice cream melted... Really good story!
| harley944 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
wow loved it
| Zafira00 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
I love virgin fics...
this was a gud one, congrats
| otherrealmwriter chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
Nice story here. Really liked the lemon in it. *nosebleed*
| Death by Me chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
that was so sexy and sweet. hope you make nore
| Samantha chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
im impressed :) that was prety hot lol
| Ms.Naruto-Fan chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
| xXHidanLover22Xx chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Very nice. I loved it. One thing that would've been good for an ending(don't worry it's fine) would have Sasuke change her earlier words. The sentence can do with the title.
"You know what whipped cream goes better on?"he'll ask.
"You." and then they can have the falling asleep thing.
Just an idea. But I loved the one-shot!
| blackraven615 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
It was good.
| xNeglectedxRejectx chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
update soon! it's really good!
| The Blk01 chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
cute, i would call it a very explicit citrus, over a lemon. over all though i liked it!
| Lien Braska chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
Beautifully written. I love how sweet he is... even if he's not being his usual broody self. I guess that's just cuz Hinata brings out the best in him! D