|Reviews for Finding Home|
| K Hanna Korossy chapter 22 . 4/21/2008
There's no review I can write to do this justice, but I bow to your creativity and reach and complexity. That was a really intriguing reworking of the Winchesters' story. I like how the important things, both facts and relationships, stayed the same while everything else flowed around them. Very neat job-congratulations!
| Quick-Demon chapter 22 . 3/24/2008
lol so much for Sam staying at Stanford story. Anyway this was way much butter and Ive enjoyed it!
Anyway thanks for sharing your story, Ive enjoyed it!
| MayukoSon chapter 22 . 3/24/2008
Amazing! I'm so glad this story turned out the way it did. Best AU story I've ever read. This seemed like a very plausible turn the show could've taken. I loved how bits were still the same and I just loved the way the characters grew as the story went in such a different direction. The adult language was very refreshing and I wish the real show could have it. It was great having John around more and I can't get enough of Psychic!Sam. Really, great job all around. I'll be looking forward to more from you!
| Ghostwriter chapter 22 . 3/24/2008
Wow. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
| writterperson chapter 22 . 3/24/2008
THAT STORY ROCKED! I fell in love with it from the first time I read a chapter! And then I got busy and I couldn't review, and I just now finished the story and it was a great story, and your story line didn't seem choppy at all! It was great and I wouldn't mind seeing a sequil, or just a new stpry, great job and keep writing!
| Surplus Imagination chapter 17 . 3/24/2008
I wouldn't think a blood ritual would matter to Dean. John, on the other hand, it does. I have to wonder what is running through his mind.
I'm sure the answer is waiting. I'm way behind on the chapters.
| Surplus Imagination chapter 16 . 3/24/2008
Nice chapter. I like the twist with your story arc here. John wanting to use Sam's 'gifts' makes sense. Thanks!
| Moonfairyhime chapter 22 . 3/24/2008
| jenilee chapter 22 . 3/24/2008
Great story. I'm sorry to see it end, I really enjoyed it.
| Kaewi chapter 22 . 3/23/2008
Wow, this was really great! I have a big problem with Dean's deal on the show, and I absolutely love the way you avoided that in the way you wrote this story.
I kind of wish this was how it really went, because it focuses so much on the emotional side of things without it being out of character. It's like you've taken the major themes of the show and kept them alive in a new way, taking out a lot of the unnecessary stuff. I look forward to seeing more from you!
| McB chapter 22 . 3/23/2008
I've been reading from the beginning and if I haven't reviewed before, I'd just like to say that I truly loved this story, and I can't wait to read more from you.
| friendly chapter 22 . 3/23/2008
nice job.. that was a good story
| ChaiGrl chapter 22 . 3/23/2008
Awe it is sad to see your story come to an end. It has been such a treat to read your story. It always thrilled me to check my email and see the updates in the box. Thanks so much for the great read. Hope to read more from you soon. Until then, take care and Happy Writing!
| bb1028 chapter 22 . 3/23/2008
Great, great ending to this awesome story! I loved that last part between the brothers.. they really needed to talk and get things straight. And Sam's thank you “For bringing me home” was seriously perfect.
Sam stopping Dean from hitting the Impala, Dean talking about it always being the three of them, everything beginning to fall apart when Sam left for school, and both of them admitting that (in not so many words) they couldn't go on without the other... really, really awesome.
And how you changed things around, how John ended up dying.. great twist of things. It was so sad, but really awesome to see both of their reactions to what happened in that cemetary. For them both to be seeing blood on their hands, and really just being in shock after what happened.. you did a great job with that. And to top that off, to have Sam doubting himself, quetioning what he did, and asking Bobby “What’s that say about me?”... one of my favorite lines was his response - “Means you’re a goddamn Winchester, boy.” Love that even after his attempts to leave hunting, go to school, and be normal.. he's still a Winchester, and would do for his family exactly what they'd do for him.
Considering the way you say this story changed from what you had originally planned I think you did an awesome job with it.. and I really love the finished product. Definitely wouldn't mind seeing the aftermath of all this, where the boys go from here... but thats just a thought :) lol
Again awesome job, and until next time.. take care!
| carocali chapter 22 . 3/23/2008
I really like how you played with the storyline. You still got to the same sort of end, just in a different way. I like that the boys are together, with no secrets, ready to take on the demon army.
Glad this grew from one little chapter to 22 - it was much more satisfying!