Reviews for Shi
random-shit chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
This isn't crappy. It's pretty good. And I'm fond of the way you wrote it.
JessieLiHere chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
I loved the way you wrote this! I totally loved the ending...makes me want more...makes me want to imagine it myself...and makes me want to read more of your works! they are very good! Well! I'm a little inspired now so I'm going to go work on my own Zombie Loan Yaoi Story! lol. I hope you read it if when I eventually put it up! lol
ashimaru chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
this is really good! you should write more lemons...XD
incarnate of evil chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Ah! I love it. Write me more, I need more, and maybe even a bit more lemony would be nice if you have no problem writting them, I would like to read one. Do it NOW, for me!
Rin0rourke chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Love you taking advantage of the common sounding names, genius. You writing style is beautiful and flawless.

-Rin
Ryuutarouchan chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
Hey, nothing wrong with this story, but I'd love a little more intimacy next time.

*is a sap* _~

Feel free to feel confident about your writing, you used good grammar, spelling, punctuation, and you actually did what you intended, that's not exactly common on here _
Fake Is the New Real chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
asdfjkl; *sizzle* My brin just FRIED from the hotness of that. :D
LadyKandaYu chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
That was a bit too much! O/,./o