Reviews for Concentration
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
...oh...-_-
..oh -_o
..OHHH! O_O
Hahaha! Loved it!
TwinkieMonster chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Holy cheese! Yeah, I'd say it'a a little hard to concentrate when you're getting a blowjob! XD
Lime chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Pls pls pls write some lemons... Lime needs lemons!
Kaitlyn chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
I'm sorry but that was awful... Was that even a story?
phoeyay chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
HAHAHAHA awesome!
Wolf154657 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
XD Just wow
ANIMELOVEDOLL chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
That was cute! :Z
Zuza chan chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
hahaha.. so funny, and so cute! :D
supercrista123 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
hahahaha called it wish it was longer i send you smiles and cookies :D():D():D() ()cookie
MonDainai chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
lmao i laughed my butt off!
AmarantineOct.3'11 chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
XDD Oh, that was lovely. Have you seen the picture that basically describes this story in a whole? It actually has this scene, minus Hawkeye.
JiraiyaWhitney chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Three words come to mind: O M G

jk.

Love it Imagine what was going through Riza's head! XP (there should be a story on just what she was thinking)
hootpoop12 chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
lol it was short but good
E.Mahiru chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Oh my God. Oh dear. Oh dear oh dear. XD
popinpants chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
When you put in the summary DRABBLE and LEMONS, we the fangirl population expect some substance, not brief implications. YOU'VE FAILED US SCUM OF THE EARTH.
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