|Reviews for Silence|
| Reveiwer D chapter 5 . 2/14/2012
Hmm.. well after reading the first 5 chapters I can see a pattern. The way you've structured the sentences and the words used in the sentences make them both seem slightly less intelligent.
For example, "Said it needs to be short."
"Swear that's all I'm gonna do."
"Really need to know..."
Where are the I's at the beginning of the dialogue?
Or the overuse of "an'" instead of the full word 'and'?
These little things can bring down the potential of your story.
| Reviewer D chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Hm.. This has some potential but could've been better. First off, I don't think that would ever happen to Sam, it's just a bit unlikely and I think that you should've thought about it before you really wrote this story.
I know that many people that have been through the traumatic experience would feel this way but I just don't think that this story is realistic enough when it comes to Sam. If you think about it you would see that Sam, no matter how much he hates it, is a hunter and so it makes this hard to believe, but I shall read on a hope that some of the questions going around in my head are answered.
| LuciLucifer chapter 17 . 1/20/2012
I really hope you continue this fic. I really wanna know if/how/when Dean will confess to what he's done to Sam or John. And I really wanna see Sammy heal .
| xlozx chapter 17 . 4/26/2011
Was just wondering if you are ever going to finish this story, it's to good not to (:
| kseniya-rainbow chapter 17 . 4/18/2011
Wow! I can’t even find appropriate words to describe all the feelings after your story! it’s quite difficult to do so in my native language, and still here I am, desperately trying to do so in English! just so let you know what a wonderful masterpiece You’ve created! No, really, what a Great story! Such a deep drama with a lot of angst; emotional, sad, heartbreaking! I was openly crying for this broken family.
Characters are so accurate, so vivid, so believable!
Sammy-poor kid suffered from cruelest torture imaginable. Sure he does need all the help and support he can get, otherwise…I don’t even want to think what would happened…there is long road ahead toward healing but I wish he would stopped blaming himself (‘cause he did nothing wrong, all the blame on that twisted bastard) and accept the help of his family (they are really trying, even if they can’t yet to find the right course of actions), Dean and John sincerely love him and don’t see him anything less after what happened. His family is always there for him, and ready to pull him through the worst.
As for John..I was very happy that you brought him in. I really liked John in the show, even with all his mistakes and mysteries I really believed he loves and worries about his sons. He realized how much he let his sons down; the guilt and remorse changed him, made to understand that for his sons he should be father first and only then a hunter. And though he wasn’t there to protect Sam, and poor child paid a high price for it, he is ready to help him now and would do everything to make it better.
Dean is dealing with a lot of things too. Of course he blamed himself on everything that happened with his kid brother. This guilt was toppling over him, and even though he really tried to handle everything himself and be strong and supportive for Sam, he shouldn’t had done it alone. So I really can’t blame him for telling Dad about what happened. But with what happened to Driscoll…it was plainly heart wrenching. He was trying to do the right thing, to save one more victim from suffering…he didn’t want to kill, he isn’t a murder, it’s against his nature. So, it’s no wonder he can’t deal with it well enough and trying to escape this entire situation, though methods are horribly wrong. He needs someone to talk about, he needs help. His current condition hurts not only him, but Sam as well, ‘cause he can’t help (and instead hurt) his little brother in such a state.
Each of the Winchester men is lost in their own way. And to survive this, they should stay together and support each other along the way.
Now, that they are at Pastor Jim’s I hope he’ll help them.
I know that you haven’t updated this story in a long time, but I sincerely hope that you will, and very soon) There is such a potential for future events) Besides, I really need to know what happens next _ It’s so emotional and heartbreaking! Good written too, love you style. It is just too good to be left unfinished.
Sooo, please, pretty pretty please, update? _
Or at least can you please let us (me _ and others readers) know if you are even going to continue it? (though it would be too sad if you are not, and I am stubbornly hopping for an update))) Well, what else to say, I completely ADORE your story! _ Thank you so much for sharing it!
| Mayhem21 chapter 17 . 3/2/2011
Ok, so this has been quite good so far and I can see that you haven't updated this in quite some time and was just wandering if you intend on finishing it. I really feel like this has a lot a of potential from it's been left. Clearly somebody needs to corner Dean and get him sorted because he's spiraling out of control just as fast as Sam and overall the whole crew has got to start being honest with each other if they are going to survive this. Anyways, I really hope you have plans to continue and finish this as I'd really like to read though to the end. Until next time, Happy Writing ;)
| Marie King chapter 17 . 2/22/2011
One word: WOW! I mean this story is so emotionally wrought! U really encapsulated Dean and Sam's brother relationship extremely well! I cannot wait to read the next installment!
| CM-x-SN-x-HP-x-roxmysox chapter 17 . 2/19/2011
great story...I find your story to be very realistic...I hope you upate soon...keep up with the good work!
| IchigoChu chapter 17 . 11/11/2010
This story is so sad and realistic. I can't describe the feeling of this story in words.
| LuckyMe1 chapter 17 . 7/25/2010
I really love this story please give it some kind of ending.
| yellow-craion chapter 17 . 3/31/2010
Great story. I wasn't sure about John coming back but turned out really well. It's weird how in the show it's always John fighting with Sam and in your story John fights with Dean - but it kind of feels right. With all the guilt and the murder, and it makes Sam feel even more guilty and isolated. Another thing I loved is how you showed that Dean is human after all; he may be the protector and ...an anchor for Sam, but sometimes he needs some support and help himself. His inner struggle before and after the murder was very nicely written. But... drugs? with some strangers in a park? and the knives? Self-destructive behaviour after everything - I get that. But this seems a little too much and a little out of character. I mean, his Sammy's hurting and all, I don't think that the big over-protective brother in him would let him go that far.
Overall, I enjoyed it very much :) too bad it's not finished...
| monkeymuse chapter 17 . 2/8/2010
| averageblackmage chapter 17 . 1/7/2010
u have really dne a great job with the plot and did with such care too,
| PankakeCarnivor chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
| xXxFailingDreamsxXx chapter 17 . 11/28/2009
OMG! Poor Sam and Dean! Please write more to this story thanks.