|Reviews for Remember Me This Way|
| chocolatemud chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
i love it..
and i cry.. hahaha..
the story is really great...
| Kaiser Washington chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
It's really touching and sad... But great job.
| Anon chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Really good! Love it! Like the layout with the verse and then start paraghraph with the time. I think you sometimes change tense (eg past/present tense) you might want to go through and check it.
The end loses it a tiny bit. Maybe the interval where the line is could somehow be linked better with the next few sentences. Or you might have done that by purpose. It is very good.