Reviews for Return of the Uchiha
AngelBabe09 chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
AW! poor Sasuke loves Sakura but can't be with her?(Yet)...I didn't say anything...YOU CAN PROVE NOTHING! ...sorry...i'm done.
uiWEFNOIGERAUO12446 chapter 4 . 4/19/2008
o cool a sequil! i forgive you for not updating in a while
uiWEFNOIGERAUO12446 chapter 3 . 3/2/2008
uiWEFNOIGERAUO12446 chapter 2 . 3/2/2008
jackie-chan1230 chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
I like this story! Hope you update soon!
Frog-Wallet chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
Hm... This is interesting and off to a good start! However, I have a couple of suggestions for you to help you improve! Well, first, you need to check your grammar and spelling. Use spelling and grammar check or something like that, because in the end, it really pays off. Next, your vocabulary was quite plain; you should use more, vibrant, and exciting words. Lastly, you need to make your chapters longer. It attracts more readers. Please take this into consideration! I want to see you improve! If you fix all the things that I told you about, more reviews are bound to come! :) Thank you for reading this and I hope this helped you. If you want my help, feel free to PM me. I love to help those in need.