|Reviews for Pain|
| Nasty Evil Dead Dog chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
It was nice, well-written and full of angst. I love it. Though the grammar may not be the best, you definitely delivered the message of the story well. I hope to read more from you.
| iPurpleBerri chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
nice work.. I love the story. So cute! X3
| verbal acuity chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
... Poor Shishido. It was written well, though there were some word misuses. But besides that, I liked it. :3 Good job!
| MartySever chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
Aw, that was good! Gosh, Hiyoshi is such a trouble maker!