Reviews for Big Brother
HannahSakura.Pinoy chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
I love it! -
minoki chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
it was nice, sad yet nice
Jan Lee chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
This is very creative. It's true that sometimes people relive memories in their dreams and forget about them in the morning. You have powerful imagery and your word choice is exquisite, ie: malaise, languorous, and 'the trickling, chirruping, babbling-brook flow' are examples. You seem to catch the reader in between Wolfram's wake and sleep, and from there he or she experiences what you have written. The ending, I think, rings true. I wish that Wolfie would get over his dislike of humans so much...I hate the tension and animosity between Wolfram and Conrad. On any account, nicely written and no grammar or punctuation errors as far as these eyes can see. Good work and thanks!

~JL
DaystarsMom chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
That's really impressive. The imagery and description were fantastic - very vivid. You really made me feel the poignancy of this loss that Wolfram is denying so completely. Nice job.