Hi,

I beg to differ: I believe Sirius' middle name, even in canon, is "Orion", his full name being Sirius Orion Black...

Wbr, Adriaan

This was only God till the oc love interest arc then Hermione sue took over and made harry and the story go to shit. If not bad enough he even gets himself killed by moron weasley. What kind of a retard are you have you ever read canon. Canon Harry would never be pussy to Hermione or ron

How can you write so much shit over a million words you are a terrible writer. Harry is complete retard and pussy whipped to the extreme by Hermione. My god this is the worst bashing I have ever read of him

Wonder boy. Disney's Hercules reference? lol

Amazing Story shame theres no sequel

At this point im done. So much description i can see why the word count is so high. Sometimes its more quantity than quality. The amount of filler bullshit included is insane. and this potion trope is so stupid. After the last "this chapter will be painful for H/Hr" BS i thought it would improve. but its quite obvious that harry is actually retarded, hermione is smart but not and also the actual main character except barely anything goes right for her. just done

for someone who has the highest defense results of, supposedly, all time dude kinda sucks.
might as well be "Hermione Granger and the guy who has the fifth element"

If i see another "this is a painful chapter for H/Hr" im done ngl. its fine to drag it on but now its kinda ridiculous. Eliza is boring, harry is a really stupid 16 yr old and hermione just doesnt make sense. Bill and luna are the best characters (no ones dead), for a HP fic its kinda sad.

The reason for the two way portkey was to send Harry's body back from the graveyard to instill fear

why didn't they just ask Remus to recreate the communication mirrors? They could be made to be password protected, and a certain word or phrase would also act as a portkey. The letter writer seems complicated and time consuming. If an emergency would crop up, Harry might not have time to write out a phrase to be portkeyed somewhere!

Thanks for the memory; I grew up in Paducah, Kentucky. Haven't been there in years but, it's a nice little river town.

This is a great story. I've read it more than once but, there are portions of it that I just don't want to read/ I wonder if I'm the only person who skims over any and all scenes involving Eliza or Ron. I just can't stomach them.

Fleur’s parts are very hard to decipher what she is saying.

I enjoyed this story, although? because? the love-potion plot made me so angry I wanted to throttle my computer. Inducing emotions is a sign of a well-written story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

usual love potion tripe... I cant believe it, that's the plot I read about it in almost Ginny and Ron fanfiction. I thought this story is different, without love potions... I just lost interest in this story now. bye