|Reviews for Beautiful World|
| jd3 chapter 1 . 8/7
| Zilpa Eden chapter 1 . 4/20
This was so cute, and so wholesome.
| S.V. II chapter 1 . 4/9
So this was pretty amazing. I’m not really a narusaku shipper but you just write it so heart wrenchingly well I’m sold. I know it doesn’t state it, but it feels like this story ties into that one you wrote where naruto keeps cycling. No lie that was an awesome concept well done. Easily one of my fav one shots. Really hope you continue on this concept and keep adding to their story it’s so damned fascinating. And with this Rona keeping us on lock down we sure have quite a bit of free time to read (unless ur an essential worker then hays off to you). Anyways hope ur doing well
| EMR-one7 chapter 1 . 8/6/2019
SPOILERS FOR THE STORY AHEAD!
I think that the concept for this story was really good, but the execution wasn’t the best. I feel like the story didn’t get to flow as much because the scenes between characters were so short. That’s probably because this was a one shot, but still, I think the flow could’ve been improved. Also, when too many bad things happen in close proximity, it can disconnect the reader from the story because it seems unlikely that so many bad things would happen all at the same time. I felt that disconnect when the thing happened with Ino, then both of Sakura’s parents died. So all in all, I think this was an ok story, but there’s definitely room for improvement. I’ll give it a 7/10.
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 11/13/2018
Well that was another great one-shot I mean wasn't much Naruto per say but that was OK this was quite a surprise but in another of your stories u made him the Ghost Of Konoha which was cool also, this was nice also NaruSaku and ShikaIno are 4 of my fav characters also glad Ino was OK that would have sucked ass if she died and quite an amusing ending, so cute again I guess we'll have to use our imaginations of what happens next and mine says NaruSaku get together.
| kloudklocvalley chapter 1 . 9/15/2018
I'm probably trying to sound smarter than I am, but this is one of those fics where you can just read through the whole anime-ish cheesiness and in-your-face drama because it's been VERY neatly boiled down to its essence. Uhh, yeah, that's a longer way of saying that I like it a lot. I don't personally do shipping, but I get cravings for them at times, and this sated my current NaruSaku one. I really like your writing style for some reason. It's got that anime/manga-ish narration vibe that other fics try so hard at but fail.
Huh, I thought the name Shinohara Akari was familiar. Kinda ironic because I binge watch Makoto Shinkai films every summer and I recently came back from one of his exhibitions.
Wait, the landlord is Ikari Gendou? I mean, I love the randomness of it, but he didn't FEEL like Gendou. He doesn't seem like the type to shake his head or be biased towards a jinchuuriki, kinda like an equal opportunity stoic-ass to anyone who isn't his wife. Then again, it's been a while since I've watched NGE, and in this oneshot he grew up most likely as a civilian in Konoha, not as a scientist and military commander on Earth. Or I guess the Nine Tails killed his wife and he hates Naruto for it, ayyy.
Still love it anyway, kek. Ikari frigging Gendou as Naruto's landlord. Still needs a 'pushing up glasses further up nose with one hand in pocket' move, though.
Someone totally needs to commission Makoto Shinkai to draw Naruto scenery. I'd pay out of my own wallet to see his renditions of Konoha.
| Glory7789 chapter 1 . 3/30/2018
I actually cried a little... that is a big achievement. Thank you so much for taking the time to write and post this story. It was beautiful.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
NO, I NEED A PART TWO
| thecartoongirl22 chapter 1 . 8/27/2017
I always love your stories 3 thanks you they are always so beautiful and inspiring!
| HijabiGirlForever786 chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
Your stories are beautiful. Thank you for sharing of with us x.
| Kidloco chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
love it.. that all
will wait for new ones
| SexiiFoxii chapter 1 . 5/10/2015
I loved it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
| ShiningSunsets chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Dear god, all of your stories are so heartbreakingly beautiful and tearjerkingly meaningful. It's so rare to have a gift like this...please, I BEG of you to not abandon this site and not use this blessing of yours.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
As crazy as it sounds finding morals in Fanfiction stories is just amazing. You make people happy, givd them a message, and write like the pencil is an extension of your body. Never stop. Come back, people miss your work.