Reviews for Rules
yay chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
There are a lot of grammar errors in this. Eliminating those would help the fic a lot.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Cute! :)
dimkasgirl07 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
that was short and sweet! and you can't forget cute! aww i loved it XD
Theory.of.a.good.fanfiction chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
This is a really good story! love the end...and the hand licking was awesome!
over-rehearsed chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Aww, that was cute.

There was a bit of a tense change though. Especially in this sentence:

So I'm sitting in my room, home alone, Hugo was out with this little girlfriends of his. My parents were at work and my cousins were either over seas or away.

If you use present tense, the I'm part was fine, but then you go into the Hugo WAS out and my parents WERE out. Those are past tense...

... I can't believe I just went into grammar freak mode with someone I don't even know... oh well.

Much love!
4-eyedDragon chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Love it! This is going to my faves!
JustAnotherCrazyWriter chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Haha, I love the ending! But... why would she lick a hand? :D That's really different...

:D Love this story!
FaBAMF chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
awesome. you shud diffo write more
Tina101 chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
I like Rose's rules about guys, short, sweet and to the point.

Cute story overall, I like the different sides of Rose.

aldehyde chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
cute, especially the last line. lots of grammatical mistakes though so give the ficlet a quick read over, or ask a friend to review it.
silverbirch chapter 1 . 2/27/2008