| Reviews for Lucky Me |
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   MartialArts Writer chapter 17 . 4/18/2008 doubt he can keep it up for quite honesting I love the revenge thing between them it is very intresting and makes the story a definite M rating.I hnoestly think you should keep going with it for at least 1 or 2 more ! |
| ali93 chapter 17 . 4/18/2008 hahahahahaha i LOVE it! pleaase post more soon! I LOVE YOU! |
| Clumsy318 chapter 17 . 4/18/2008 omc soo good go and update now! |
| COAIM chapter 16 . 4/16/2008 lol! Can't wait for next chapter! |
| Scholgirl29 chapter 16 . 4/16/2008 update please |
| Otaku Samurai chapter 16 . 4/14/2008 Whoa-whoa-whoa! Damn, that was intense. Dude, if you write simple "soft-almost-but-not-exactly" sex scenes this, uhm, intensely, I wonder what the actual lemon will be like. Yeah... Your fans are really begging for one, and that's making me laugh right now. Heh... Anyway, nice chapter...? This is interesting. Oh yeah, I think I'm starting Twilight this week. I think. Science projects are due... |
| Otaku Samurai chapter 15 . 4/14/2008 Heh, green m&ms are FUN. I'm totally "heh"-ing right now. Anyway, there wasn't really much to this chapter, much like you said, but think of it as a positive... That its building up to the good stuff. Yeah, anyway, on with chapter 16... |
| roughdraft525 chapter 16 . 4/14/2008 so if non-lemon chapters can get that steamy.. i can't wait for the actual events! love it. |
| Bubble Blower chapter 16 . 4/11/2008 very good chappie post soon plz didn't know that those M&M's ment that lol |
| ali93 chapter 16 . 4/11/2008 hahahaha make bella do something AMAZING! |
| jennah1331 chapter 16 . 4/11/2008 great, great, great chapter. i loved the fact that edward was finally the one torturing bella, not the other way around, and that he pushed even some of his own limits :) can't wait to see what's next. please post soon! not a request...really more of a demand - just so the tone is clear :). |
| moonbeam228 chapter 16 . 4/11/2008 Just found your fic and it's great! This chapter was definitely hot. I love the interaction between Edward and Bella. Can't wait for the next update. |
| Clumsy318 chapter 16 . 4/11/2008 good job |
| littleyellowporsche chapter 16 . 4/10/2008 that was pretty hott! and to go with your OneRepublic love right now, I just read an interview of Kellan Lutz and he said that he likes OneRepublic too! tee hee! anyways...Edward on Bella...hot! Update soon! Jack |
| peace-love-hippies chapter 16 . 4/10/2008 You write these chapters so well I can feel the sexual tension between the two of them lol. Keep up the good- no scratch that keep up the great work. |