Heh...I bet you're so excited...I was gonna put a snide-smirky comment, but I'll save that for the later, most likely more sexual chapters. This was somewhat of a filler, but it does hold off for now. Nice job!

So, how's your summer so far? Get a damn cell phone yet? Lol jk, but I see that you haven't laid off the kinky, even though I told you not to have a perverted summer. Like that's gonna happen, right? Anyway, see you around, and talk to you later XD

this ch was okay...nit 1 of my favorites but ok...

can u make the scenes a little longer. or make at least till they actually do it instead of stopping at the best parts but u write incredibly no lie

omg its amazing brillant i love it!

u should have went farther in the "scene" but its so good so far

No..oh fucking hell. Seriously, my face was about three inches from the computer screen the entire chapter. WHY! Oh my GOSH..I so feel Bella's pain. That was just bleeding cruel. Fuck, I need to find me a huge shower and a sexy vampire (meh, sexy in general should do though..)

Great chapter..wish there had been more sex, but alas.

o0mg that ch was AWESOME i love the part wen she was like because u dotn want thats wen the real drama started u r an amazing auther

in ch2 im guessing the occasion is the WEDDING

the first ch is not horny... well it is buti wouldnt put it that way... lets go with wat u said cute lol

omgomgomgomg! PLEASE update soon! I freakin love this story!

-huggs!-

Oh, I can't wait to see what you have up for sleeve for Bella's party, and especially Edward's! Great update, though.

And I am totally up for twenty-page chapters if you ever feel like posting one ;)

This is amazing! I wanna know what's going on!

And Edward - I wanna see what Emmett has in store for him...

Update soon! (:

Sam.

type faster lol

post soon plz

NO

ali's pissed... and thats not good...

arg

well, post more soon

love ya

xoxoxo,

Ali

yo, u shud hav eddie and every1 at his Bach party have a penis size competition. thad b hella lmao

Nice chappie, gr8 work