Reviews for Survival of the Smartest
Anonymous chapter 12 . 5/22/2013
Okay...Um, well this is not what I expected. I hope you know that you rated this "M". And the ending is, I'm really sorry I mean no disrespect, but really bad. You could've done much better
twirob chapter 12 . 6/19/2011
wow that was so fast! it was totally enjoyable though thanks for sharing it :D
yanxxx chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
:D really cute.
parkesy23 chapter 12 . 6/24/2010
thanks - cute story

enjoyed it

look forward to reading your other story
xXThing2.PurpleMenaceXx chapter 12 . 10/9/2009
No offense but that was the second crappiest ending ever i mean really it all like she spends 3 long months getting over it and sorta ignoring him and them all the sudden its all like "OMG! We won...I love you again"*kissy kissy kissy* no offense but you might as well have written that.
Jazmyn chapter 12 . 8/23/2009
that was amazing i loved it
craigsgirl48167 chapter 8 . 5/19/2009
Didn't he just tell Jessica he loved her too?
saya.sen chapter 12 . 4/29/2009
Umm, the ending seemed weird to me, like first he throws up then he's all better then they win and she kisses him. I didn't get what his throwing up had to do with anything, and they didn't talk about any of the things that caused them to break up in the first place. I know I wouldn't forgive a guy so easily for no reason like that. Sure she may have been happy but I don't see how that allowed her to suddenly forget everything he did to her. That seemed to sudden to me.
JordieGirl13 chapter 12 . 4/19/2009
That had to be the best cheesy/corny/love felt/best ending I have ever read, online or in a real book! I did not see that coming at all, and thats what made this story so great. i hope to read more from you in the future.
TheImperfectedOne chapter 12 . 2/16/2009
lol love this story! hey, one of the second place winners name was Jimmy E World. Any connection to the AMAZING band Jimmy Eat World? tehe :)
Guillermo Ethelstein Kingerty chapter 8 . 1/16/2009
when edward says "I've never said that to anyone else, trust me." didn't he just say it to jessica...oh well great story!
luv-edward cullen-forever chapter 12 . 1/8/2009
i like the ending i just wish u would extend it more and edward never got to explin why he was with jessica so that was off bt other wise the story was pretty good- i liked it is there a sequeal? :P
TwilightandCanadaforever chapter 12 . 12/6/2008
good story but hardly needed to be M
jahluv18 chapter 12 . 11/25/2008
ok the story was good but around the 7th or 8th ch it started to sound rushed
juliaSwan chapter 12 . 10/12/2008

that was sweet

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