Reviews for Survival of the Smartest
Guest chapter 12 . 9/13
This was by far one of the worst stories I've ever read. Edward contradictions about the"I love you" aside he gives no reason for the whole Jessica the plot whatsoever. Bella is completely week and immature and let's Edward walk on her constantly.
Anonymous chapter 12 . 5/22/2013
Okay...Um, well this is not what I expected. I hope you know that you rated this "M". And the ending is, I'm really sorry I mean no disrespect, but really bad. You could've done much better
twirob chapter 12 . 6/19/2011
wow that was so fast! it was totally enjoyable though thanks for sharing it :D
yanxxx chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
:D really cute.
parkesy23 chapter 12 . 6/24/2010
thanks - cute story

enjoyed it

look forward to reading your other story
xXThing2.PurpleMenaceXx chapter 12 . 10/9/2009
No offense but that was the second crappiest ending ever i mean really it all like she spends 3 long months getting over it and sorta ignoring him and them all the sudden its all like "OMG! We won...I love you again"*kissy kissy kissy* no offense but you might as well have written that.
Jazmyn chapter 12 . 8/23/2009
that was amazing i loved it
craigsgirl48167 chapter 8 . 5/19/2009
Didn't he just tell Jessica he loved her too?
saya.sen chapter 12 . 4/29/2009
Umm, the ending seemed weird to me, like first he throws up then he's all better then they win and she kisses him. I didn't get what his throwing up had to do with anything, and they didn't talk about any of the things that caused them to break up in the first place. I know I wouldn't forgive a guy so easily for no reason like that. Sure she may have been happy but I don't see how that allowed her to suddenly forget everything he did to her. That seemed to sudden to me.
JordieGirl13 chapter 12 . 4/19/2009
That had to be the best cheesy/corny/love felt/best ending I have ever read, online or in a real book! I did not see that coming at all, and thats what made this story so great. i hope to read more from you in the future.
TheImperfectedOne chapter 12 . 2/16/2009
lol love this story! hey, one of the second place winners name was Jimmy E World. Any connection to the AMAZING band Jimmy Eat World? tehe :)
Guillermo Ethelstein Kingerty chapter 8 . 1/16/2009
when edward says "I've never said that to anyone else, trust me." didn't he just say it to jessica...oh well great story!
luv-edward cullen-forever chapter 12 . 1/8/2009
i like the ending i just wish u would extend it more and edward never got to explin why he was with jessica so that was off bt other wise the story was pretty good- i liked it is there a sequeal? :P
TwilightandCanadaforever chapter 12 . 12/6/2008
good story but hardly needed to be M
jahluv18 chapter 12 . 11/25/2008
ok the story was good but around the 7th or 8th ch it started to sound rushed
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