Reviews for Love Is A Devil
Potterfriendz chapter 5 . 3/13/2008
That was an awesome chapter! I like the way her powers work, very creative.

The tension between Edward and Bella was done very well. I like that they aren't quite getting along yet. Edward is trying to figure out what to do and now understands some of Bella. Bella deciding she doesn't want to know things was very Bella.

Meanwhile, Felix just needs to get a clue, lol.

Keep up the excellent writing. I can't wait to see what happens next. Especially when Edward finds out about the vision. :)
grrthethird chapter 5 . 3/13/2008
awesome!

if its not too much trouble i would like Bella

to totally go off on Felix! Maybe he gets hurt...

Maybe Edward has to restrain her...

... who knows , your the author,...

Amazing story! i really liek how the met...

So cool

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Love

GRR the third!
Chaotic-Cullen chapter 5 . 3/13/2008
W-o-w! I love it so far! Hahaha, please continue the story! It's amazing, gives a completely different outlook on the Volturi and it's inhabitants, amazing...

That's a very interesting power for her, I really like the idea... maybe you can contain some shape-shifting in oncomming chapters, like if she's trying to hide from Edward she can turn into a Nightingale and fly off or something...

Great story! 9.5 out of 10

Chaotic_Cullen

Megg
stupidvampires101 chapter 5 . 3/13/2008
Ok, you’re just evil! How could you just stop there? Just kidding. I'm pretty sure I know who was next to her. I feel really bad for Bella for not believing in love. Of course it sounds like she had a pretty crappy life as a human, so it's expected. The whole Felix thing is bothering me! He needs put in his place! I'm sure he will be eventually. The whole body image thing made sense to me. I'm looking forward to seeing how Edward, and probly Alice too, break down Bella's walls so she believes in love and doesn't totally hate Edward anymore!
FairyVampire chapter 5 . 3/13/2008
i really liked this chapter. i'm sad that bella still hates edward, but edward really likes her so it is okay. update soon!
eclipselover chapter 5 . 3/13/2008
Bella can really be harsh when she is trying to be tough.
EdwardsKitten chapter 5 . 3/13/2008
As always, I love your writing.
barbiedoll123 chapter 5 . 3/13/2008
i know who it is it is edward
Screams-At-Midnight chapter 5 . 3/13/2008
Edward and bella lying in a bed... lalalalalala

Just changed the words abit... ;)
09876543211234567890 chapter 4 . 3/13/2008
that was amazing! I can't wait for more

please update soon

:)
VampireRebel chapter 4 . 3/12/2008
Ooh, I can't believe how long it took me to find this story. I absolutely adore it thus far. I actually have a thing for people hating each other before they fall in love (I am assuming they fall in love). I don't know why. Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter, and finding out what you mean with the fighting.
NuruEves chapter 4 . 3/12/2008
Wow! Amazing! Incredible! I love it! Do keep writing, I can't wait to hear more from you!

However...I noticed a small grammer mistake in your writing.

"I can't believe it." She whispered. Note the period after 'I can't believe it'. In that type of writing, it should be a comma. "I can't believe it," She whispered, is the correct way of writing it. Other then that, great job!
Midday Moonlight chapter 4 . 3/12/2008
yeah i want more
Howl for the Moon chapter 4 . 3/11/2008
wow it's really good and y didn't you go into to detail on the change though you probably wanted to get on with the story right. It's really good and i really like it can't wait for the next part.
RunningWithVampires chapter 4 . 3/11/2008
Ah, the change! I have read so many changes, but yours is definately the best! Bella is always described as brave and of someone that cares more about others than about herself (specially in epov's), and I think it's more like her to try not to scream. Even in the original setting I think she at least will try to make it easy for everybody else.

I love this chapter, and in epov that sentence "Damn her for making me...feel." I don't know exactly why, but this is my favourite sentence in this chapter. It just, says so much.

And Alice has got a new shopping-friend! Yay!

I also like that Aro promised that Felix could have her. I'm looking forward to the moment when she hears that!

Another great chapter, love your stories, you rock!
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