Loved it thank you

Nice start to this story. Very mysterious.

Way to make Bella look easy!

Awwwwww! That was such a sweet story. I loved it!

Enjoyable story.

That was just perfect. I was so mad at Edward for leaving her at first, but I sort of figured it out with Bella- the reason for his leaving. It's just like New Moon- he needs to stop thinking he knows what's best for Bella. I really loved the ending tho. When Rose ran into Bella and told her what happened, I was literally freaking out. I absolutely loved it

Omg you don't know how happy I am to see this has a sequel! I completely loved this story! Now I'm gonna head over and read the sequel :)

I found this in the favorite stories of sheviking. I am so glad I decided to read it. I enjoyed it so much. Thanks for sharing. xo

Sigh...that sounds so good. I would love to "soak up the way that he made me feel just being in his presence". Thanks for sharing. xo

excellent story.

This is ridiculous. "Maybe he looked at me and thought I wasn't worth saving" What kind of BS thought is that? He might not been super nice to her, but she really thinks he's that much of an asshole? Way to meld self esteem issues and being judgmental into one flawed character

Wow, I didn't read Edward as being an ass. Maybe a bit thrown off...plus who is she to him? She totally overreacted.

i see why he did what he did to bella didnt want to live in a world w /out her. totally selfish but ...

i loved this chapter so beautifully written

Lovely.