|Reviews for That's How It Crumbles|
| andy chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
| Mystic-Nin chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
Great story :)
Skunky's name is Zephyr or Zepher (I'm not too sure about the spelling. They only mention her name once in the first episode you see her. I know this as I sat and watched reruns of Sigma 6 to catch her name for my own story lol.
| Asterisk78 chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
I really enjoyed this story. It was well laid out, I'm guessing because you've written so many other stories. (Yes, I went and read your profile. I was curious. I hadn't seen you around these parts before.)
Since you asked for helpful advice, I will give you the most helpful advice I can think of, which has to do with your dialogue. You punctuated like this:
“This is my fault.” Scott said.
That should be “This is my fault,” Scott said. Notice the comma that I have so conveniently added. Also, you should leave the pronouns in lower case after the comma. For example:
“I guess you could say that Skunky.” He placed his hands in his head.
This should be:
“I guess you could say that Skunky,” he placed his hands in his head.
Anyway, not a big difference. Also, I'm not sure how this was AU except for Scarlett's marriage/divorce. Was I right?