|Reviews for Forward|
| Fai Gensou chapter 50 . 4/24/2016
Could there be an episode where a job goes perfectly smooth, but everyone's so paranoid about it not that when they realize it had afterwards, someone comments on how they don't like it?
| IcyPanther chapter 78 . 4/9/2016
I have been reading this story for the last couple of days, and I just have to say that it is easily one of the most well written fanfictions I have ever read. Your characterizations of the crew are amazing and all of your original characters fit in so well.
I see that this hasn't been updated in quite a while, but I am hoping that someday it will be. I will certainly be keeping an eye on it and crossing my fingers!
Thank you for the incredibly enjoyable read thus far.
| Cammy P chapter 1 . 4/4/2016
I'm just going to binge my way through this story, and cry myself to sleep at the end of C78 because it's not finished (yet?).
| Guest chapter 78 . 3/2/2016
The "Eternal Prohibition" was left on Earth-That-Was, everyone was permitted weapons, and taxes were both the lowest of any government in history and actually treated as charity, then war was declared and things got worse
In Firefly the Core Worlds are peaceful and prosperous, but the government can do damn near anything they want to their citizens as long as they can justify it — such as cut up little girls' brains or dose entire planets with mind control drugs. The Rim Worlds are anarchic and destitute mostly run by thugs and debt slavers out of Dickens, but you can always look your accuser in the eye and settle it one way or another — or even round up a posse of fellow victims and exact some frontier justice. The argument seems to be that a healthy civilization needs both and any attempt to "rid the world of sin" will do nothing but harm in the long run.
| Kutlakh chapter 78 . 2/23/2016
Hello can you continue
| nomdeplume30 chapter 78 . 2/20/2016
Ahhhhhhh! Where's the rest!? I sincerely hope you continue this one day. This has been one of the most amazing stories I've ever read. Each story arc has been fantastic. I love how you're developing the original characters. Your OCs have been superb as well. I loved the Six Rifles. Really, you've done an amazing job all around, and I would love to read more! Best to you, and thank you for this story!
| highlord24 chapter 1 . 2/5/2016
Did you hear that Alan Tudyk from Firefly is launching a fanfiction contest? He will read the winning story in a video, and there is even an import tool for the fanfiction platform: [slash] r [slash] tudyk
Your fic is the best (and longest) I have ever read. It'd be well worth submitting!
Anyhoo keep writing and keep being awesome!
| Dodecarachel chapter 77 . 1/4/2016
I know I should be used to this feeling as a Whedon fan, but I am so disappointed, this can NOT be the end. NO.
I loved this. This is probably the best fanfic I have ever read, and you have such a good understanding of story and character...its impeccable. More.
| Guest chapter 78 . 1/4/2016
This ABSOLUTELY needs to continue, though It seems like it probably won't. I have yet to see someone who understands the characters they're writing as well as you. We know who's POV we're in within a few lines based on how they speak and think, and that's incredible. But what I was most impressed with was your ability to create river think. Not only mimic the way she interacts, but imagine so completely her thought process. I always thought her interactions must have been so difficult for the writers of the show, and you took that a step further and did It SO WELL.
Pretty pretty please. With cherries and whipped cream and maybe a slight monetary bribe. PLEASE.
| Guest chapter 78 . 12/19/2015
"Until next chapter"
I finished reading this two years ago. It's an unfinished masterpiece. I guess you're in your late thirties or early fourties now. Life kicks in. Idk though. I hope you'll do something with this, or pass it off to someone of equal skill and dedication. I haven't heard much of the browncoats for a while...
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
| StarrH chapter 78 . 12/12/2015
Please tell me you've just taken a 2 year sabbatical and you're planning to get back to this story soon. It probably goes without saying but your storytelling abilities and the talent to put on paper as it were, is pretty much unparalleled with few exceptions. It's really been exciting and consuming. I think I have eye strain from the binge reading (3 days). Anyway, You have lots of fans anxiously awaiting word from you.
| Erik Graves son of Death chapter 78 . 11/13/2015
Farewell to the ground and nihao to the Black, Once More I'm a leaf on the Wind!
| guest chapter 46 . 10/30/2015
I like how you had River forgive Dannet despite having every reason to hate him. Even after all he had helped do to her at the academy she still couldn't bring herself to hate him. A lot of fanfics have River to be very hateful towards the Alliance for what they have done to her and that is not consistent with her character. It has been shown in the series that at her core, underneath all of the insanity and programming, River is a very sweet and kind-hearted person and is not the type to hate even the people who tortured her at the Academy.
| femmefan1946 chapter 2 . 10/20/2015
River's speech is very hard to write. Most people make it too 'poetic'. I think you did a very good job here.
Good explanation of why Wash is still with us.
And Book remains mysterious...
| SemperFi34 chapter 78 . 9/13/2015
This is the best firefly story I have ever read! I love it! and hope you continue soon...