Reviews for Fullmetal Twilight
Swobchi chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
kewl, but Link X Midna? srsly?
Laughing-a-little-too-hard chapter 6 . 3/1/2009
cant wait for more o
Synneofthesun chapter 6 . 1/8/2009
Great chapter! You're writing is really improving.

And I fail for not reviewing sooner. Sorry.

I love LinkxMidna. There really isn't enough of it out there, so I thank you for writing this.

Poor Link! I hope Midna and her 'servants' XD save him soon! At least the forest temple isn't engulfed in Twilight anymore. That couldn't have been good for him.

Please update soon!
merlyn1382 chapter 5 . 8/30/2008
poor link having to rely on those two midna just mite kill them before they can resue link
SnowWolfSpirit chapter 3 . 5/9/2008
I'm very sorry i can't help you very much. I've never read or seen or played Zelda so I'm very sorry! this is a really great chapter though, and your writing is awesome too!

Keep writing!

-Sui-chan ;P
SnowWolfSpirit chapter 2 . 5/9/2008
It's so short! *wails* T0T

Please write longer chapters!

That is a really weird creature you made up there

Edward is a puppy! XD...I mean he's a huge, ferocious wolf-like creature.

I wonder what Envy will be...make him a penguin! penguins are awesome!

SnowWolfSpirit chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
This is really good Hyrule-sama!

Please keep up the good work!

-Sui-chan (SnowWolfSpirit)
Synneofthesun chapter 5 . 5/8/2008
Yay! A new chapter!

Good job on it!

Can't wait to see what happens next!
Shippo's Ramen chapter 4 . 4/22/2008
Is Ed like a runt of the litter [ED:I HEARD THAT!] (sigh) mumbles"just ignore him" Anyways as I was saying, Is Ed a smaller dog than usual or is he regular size? Good structure though! Update plz!
Shippo's Ramen chapter 2 . 4/22/2008
Not bad HHB. You did a good job describing everything and stretching things out a bit but why did you make Edward a DOG? Why not a fox or a badger for example? Not that there's anything wrong with it, I just can't exactly imaine what he would look like. But if Envy turns into an animal, couldn't he just transform? But overall, Good job.
Synneofthesun chapter 4 . 4/9/2008
Great chapter!

You've got Midna's personality down pretty well.

So when do we find out what happened to Link? And will he make an appearance any time soon?

I really like your story so far!

Please keep up the good work and up-date soon!
Synneofthesun chapter 3 . 4/9/2008
Very amusing chapter.

Keep it up!
Synneofthesun chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Yay! A fellow Link/Midna fan!

Awesome story! I don't think I've ever seen a FMA/Zelda fanfic before.

Also, I have no problem with yaoi what-so-ever.

Keep up the good work!
Hyrule Homie chapter 2 . 3/3/2008
you should make envy turn into a palm tree!
Chaossu chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
no yaoi please. animals would be good. turn Ed into a bug.
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