Reviews for And She Broke
emmzac chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
OH MY, even though you wrote this some time ago, you must write another chapter or two. This was great but I could have kept going. I want more...
HarrisM12345 chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
I love how well you captured the whole zombie-like state of her
MyImmortalMajor chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
definetly good storie
kagome1995 chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
what?the hell was that? what happen after the war
April-Cullen chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
I luv it!
MyDia chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
oh... there needs to be more!
dancing-banana-tree chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
ah you have to write a second cahapter for this fan fic and the snowball one. i love them both!
watdaforks chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
wow. that's all i can say. wow. (and i mean that in a good way)
A Purple Soul chapter 1 . 8/11/2008 is he really there? or is she imagining it? i'm a bit confused, but other than that, this is really really good. i liked the bit about time, it seemed very bella. good job!
twilighter616 chapter 1 . 7/31/2008




Bella-Swan1313 chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
That's really good! I like how Edward shows up, and makes everything right again!

keep it up!
Heart of Diamonds chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
wow wow and wow again...i loved it!

it was really emoioanl and i could picture everything in my mind...ur a great writer...keep it up!

all my love,

bemystar chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
oh, wow. interesting to see a bit of a different perspective of how bella reacted in new moon; this was really good.
jashaw chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
I wished you'd kept this up for a couple more chapters it was a different idea.
danixdigsxmetal chapter 1 . 3/3/2008

That was good.

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