i loved the story so much that i finished it in one day .

This is cute but I feel like o can’t keep reading it
You make it look like he never had problems as a kid in his first childhood. You don’t show any signs of him being upset or showing signs that he is upset or trauma. Everyone know Severus childhood was really messed up and he had to deal with a lot. You making it look like he is just ok with everything is just a let down. It’s nice to see him working through his trauma with others and showing how he change so much. This just not my cup of tea too pure and doesn’t let you see his true self

This is alright but I feel like you should had Severus put up a small fight. He is afraid of baths because his mother/father made him take cold ones and shampoo because it will hurt his eyes. I feel like there should have been an small freak out that Harry had to deal with. Remember Severus had an very bad childhood and you should show it

I don’t agree about Dumbledore living
I didn’t see him in a good way as you did. I wasn’t when he died I was when Severus Snape was. But to me Dumbledore was just as bad as the pure evil that was killed

Oh my! Simply fantastic!

Good story

would have been interesting to see what happens when sev the younger joins the rest of his family in the after life, will they be like twins or would they merge? Im not partial to bottom!harry but because you left it mostly out of the story and didnt make a huge deal of it I don't really have any complaints there. I did cry though in a couple of places, this was a great story that was well written and a pleasure to read.

Awesome!

Little Sev is so cute and I love the family he found in Harry, Ron and Drusilla. Such a heartwarming story.

I wish though that the Malfoy's had turned out as grey. Certainly, they were abusive, although I think that it wasn't because they wanted their son to hurt, just well... they were of the opinion that bodily punishment was neccessary.
Either way, I would have loved redemption for them. At least for Narcissa and Draco, who I wish could have lived. Draco wasn't evil, after all.
But oh well. Your story, your rules and it was plausible.

For some inane reason I missed Luna and Lupin, a lot. I was also surprised that the noramally rather prejudiced Hogwarts/Magical population was able to accept Snape at least insofar that they did not attack him. Well there was that time people talked about his former self but I feel it was still rather...tame? Not that that's bad, it just surprised me

I love the role the Goblins played.

I especially love the connection that formed between Snape Senior and Harry, culminating in the very touching scene in the end where they hugged, with Snape finding comfort in the boy he'd once hated.

Surprised but glad at the former Marauders' and Lily's welcome of adult Sev.

KUDOS!

I did not cry until the lovely second epilogue. Terrific story. Thanks for sharing it.

Wow. Thats a surprise

I imagine Little Sev quoting Freddie Mercury: "I'm adopted!" LOL

Impressive chapter

Ha. I can't help but imagine little Sev playing pirate with his telescope, sailing in his treehouse.

Sweet. Harry explained things very well to the elves.

Nice domestic scene. Everyone is adjusting well