Random5185 chapter 34 . 6/28/2009
You should write a sequel.
bluewingedkitty chapter 34 . 4/12/2009
Oh, WOW. Get the sequel out soon! That was a MAJOR cliffhanger you left us with. Sorry I havent reveiwed, I've been busy. But, anyways, good, good story. I enjoyed it a lot. Well written. Del is a really well shaped character and I've really loved hearing her narrate. What was the song at the end?
Mocha Iggy's Last Name Here chapter 7 . 4/4/2009
hey! i hav finally gotten back to reading this!

awesum chapter! rly well written!
SoulVenture91 chapter 34 . 4/3/2009
*falls over, twitching happileh* See, we need to plot this. Chicago, y'say? *grins* I think we can work that...
blackberry01 chapter 34 . 4/1/2009
OMG you used a song from "Spirit". I love you. Now, I know that sounds awkward but...what can I say? I'm only being honest! haha, just kidding (sort of). Love the story so much. I wanna re-read it. Wish I had more time :( is there gonna be more Iggy-Delilah action next chapter? cuz no one will complain if you throw in a bit more...*hinthintnudgenudge* (haha, nudge nudge? get it?)

bluewingedkitty chapter 33 . 3/13/2009
I KNEW IT. Derek is making a (sorta?) reappearence...I think? I hope... hinthint...
bluewingedkitty chapter 32 . 3/6/2009
Whoo, update!


Nice, long long, exactly, did this take you?

Nice characterization. I love Max and Del's little chats. They're like twins.

Okay, peace out.
Mocha Iggy's Last Name Here chapter 6 . 1/13/2009
gr... i looked at the reviews and spoiled something for myself...

anyway, i havnt been reviewing 4 the otha chappies, so...


i rly think mor ppl should read it, though, becuz its one of the longest (and best) storys. its weird cuz all the super long ones i see hav lots of reviews. (hehe... i accidently wrote all 'the longs ones i see r rly long'. im weird.)


bluewingedkitty chapter 31 . 12/20/2008
I still do NOT like you for killing off Derek. :P

Otherwise, good chapter.
Mocha Iggy's Last Name Here chapter 1 . 12/13/2008


and this is just the prologue...
bluewingedkitty chapter 29 . 10/23/2008
Okay, I read it, I'm reviewing, update soon...please... :)
bluewingedkitty chapter 28 . 10/23/2008
WHA? You killed Derek!

Other than THAT...

good chapter!
Darker Still chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
This is REALLY good. Me like, me like. Lots of detail and good dialogue. :) Keep it up, lovie.
bluewingedkitty chapter 27 . 9/10/2008
Hey! No more chapters! Grr.

Exellent, exellent job so far. Love it. :)

My mom's trying to make me read Tom Sawyer, cuz that's my homework and I don't wana...

Sorry for the random info.

The thing I like most about your story is the character development. It's really well done, and Delilah and Derek are really believable.

When will your next update be? You left Del at a cliffie. :(

Well, no, not really.

But. Moving on.

Love it and want more. :)
bluewingedkitty chapter 5 . 9/7/2008
Great, exellent job so far. I love it. One thing though, try and space the paragraphs a little farther apart, it's kinda hard to read when the text is all bunched together. But the story is FABULOUS.
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