Reviews for Morning After
West.Artemis chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
Loved it... Wow. Loved it.
aavonlea chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Awww this was really nice, great job!
Brint3453 chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
i was hoppeing that their mind would be alterd or something but having them see bestboy still alive was amazing and i gess i can go on about time travel and other dimensens and the theri behind it but this is fanfiction and you can make time tavling any way you want it.
BornBlindtoBeauty chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
i liked you story alot! xD it was cute. :) happy ending. thats a good thing! :D
Nightmaree chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
I actually have a couple of problems with this story. Actually, I must confess that would be a bit of an understatement. I absolutely hate this story. How is it that you managed to throw each individual character out of their normal routines? That is quite impressive. I'm absolutely astounded with your lack of basic knowledge on this series. You even misinterpreted Cyborg, which is one of the easiest characters to display. Kudos to you for being one of the worst writers of your generation. Have you even seen the series? Through your writing, it is quite clear that you haven't. It hurt my eyes just reading it. I usually post something good at this point, but I have nothing further to say. I have one other complaint, though.

Sixty Seven Forty Three

Can you tell me what that equals? I can tell you what it doesn't equal, and that would be One Hundred. It equals One Hundred and Ten. Obviously, you don't have the basic math skills to know that. So now, you can't write and you can't add. Congratulations.

If you have any problems with this review feel free to contact me.
FlameToungue chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
cute
bbfan77 chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
wow... this was a truly amazing story :D

I loved it! The way you brought BB and Raven together was very original and interesting :D

didn't catch any big grammar mistakes... so.. great job ;)

Sincerly - Dora
Wingz chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Aww! This is such a cute story. Its been a while since I've read a Teen Titans story, and I'm happy I read this one. I love the date scene, Beast boy is just so cute!

Great story!

-Wingz
Amethyst DragonRider chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
I loved it! It was cute n_n
All The Good Names Taken chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
That was very well written. And a very interesting .
ElphieYo chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Aww, that was cute. I'm glad they got BB back. Very sweet. Made me cry a little. But Very good story. :)
titanfan45 chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
That was well written. I love time travel tales when a tragedy is to my favorites list.
SoLittleLove chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Aw! I love BBxRae!
Sandshrew777 chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
I think the premise of this is a little shaky. How is BB so fragile in his emotional status? Why did he have such a strong reaction? You attempt to explain it, but then you let it go. I think it needs fleshing out for us to understand.

The idea of using Warp's clock to go back in time is a good one. (And thank goodness you stuck to canon for an idea like that. Introducing something else would take far too long. Good for you.) The reactions of the Titans to "There are two of me?" are strong and well-characterized.

I don't think, however, that Raven would tell BB that his future self commits suicide. Even in a moment of "I've got to think fast", I don't think she would spit out the truth. It's not her style, not quite.

I love the date. Well-characterized and well-written. I was half-expecting BB to be the one squealing and grasping onto Raven, but you kept him in the gender role of the guy, and I loved that. Raven's reservedness regarding the entire thing was masterfully and subtly presented. Nicely done.

You handle time travel smartly. The Raven-Raven conversation is solid. All of the minor characters are well-presented, although I think the Robins would be trying to take control just a tinch more.

A smart idea (beyond the bit of confusion with BB's character), and overall, nicely presented. I enjoyed myself. :)

Nice work!

Keep writing.
XX.xXx.AchillezWiplash.xXx.XX chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
I really enjoyed this. Is it possible to make a sequel to this for you? To see beastboy and ravens relationship gorw...? Just a suggestion ;) great story
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