|Reviews for When You Dance|
| Fandom Jumper chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Ha! That was a great story! I think everyone was completely in character, and the plot is good, too. I can't wait to see what happens next. And I loved Prudence's line: "Only Max could get that fucked at two in the morning." So true. I could totally see all of this stuff happening. I hope you update again soon!
| michelinamarie chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Oh, this is so lovely! The style is extremely intriguing - the little intervals separating the segments are very powerful and insightful. You also put a touch of your own into the characters, not so much that they're out of the character, but that they're people we can't predict, and I LOVE that.
I'm definitely intrigued - this is gorgeous.
| TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
My goodness, you are talented.
It was funny and heartbreaking and sad and uplifting and just...amazing. No criticisms whatsoever.
Just absolutely lovely, and I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Much love to you and your amazing skills