nice effort but nooooooooooooooooooo

Beautiful

Loved it so sweet a little unlikely that Philip would have maid it that way but I think that it is important to follow your own stile of writing and keep on working I think that with time practice and percverance you could become a great author

That was great! I love the Amber Spyglass and I was so sad when they had to leave each other. I cried. That was the perfect epiloque for a romantic book! Please right more about their adventures in the world of the dead!

loved it... yay! will & lyra forever!...and ever and ever...

That's such a great epilogue. It's so sweet!

Short, sweet, yet to the point. Good job.

whoever it was that rote that is as good as philip pullman himself. it was absolutely fantstic. i neerly cried it was so happy..i think i will print it n rite it into the back of my amber spyglass. u r a gr8 riter and should be recognised 4 it. that page is now the top of my favourite list. pleeeeessssee send an email 2 me so i can talk 2 u. im eoin and im 14 from ireland.()

thank u 4 makin the amberspyglass a better book

Eoin

that was sweet, and so sad too...

good, except lyra can't "catch her breath when she's with will cause whe doesn't have breath, she is DEAD!

*sniff*...waaaaaH! Its so pretty! *sniff* great fic

NO NOOOOOOO! you CANT let them through that window without pan and...erm...kyra or whatever! they didnt even say GOODBYE! WAAAAAAAAAAA

yeah a bit too soppy for me not much content either

sorry i'm being mean

that was cute...

nice