Reviews for thunderstorm
TrekkeiGenkai chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
Nice story!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Damn! I hope all your one-shots are multi-fic hahaha
jhian casey chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
is there another sequel with this ? this is sweet and funny! hahahh
Mimi chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
itachi13080 chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Whoa...that was interesting to watch. Funny for sure. ;) And the way he admitted to paying her back for the hospital lesson was priceless! ;D
king-of-sass chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
This was so cute 3 I love Itachi/Sakura pre-slash banter
silveroaks chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Loved it !
young kagome chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
Awe how nice.
pisquenta chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I need more playful Itachi and moody Sakura
Eliphante chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Hiii again Anna! We're stuck in Friday traffic and it's pretty bad haha. But it means I finally have time to just sit and write a review on my phone.

I enjoyed the follow up to tossing a coin just as much as the original piece. Even though I read it the first time a long time ago, the second time around didn't disappoint. I didn't notice anything that sounded off or any grammatical mistakes.

Not everybody could be as angelic as dear Hinata-chan, after all.

Oh whatever are you implying there Sakura? Haha. Are you a tad envious of Hinata's ever present angelic nature? It reminds me of our conversation of a BEHIND THE SCENES: NARUTO CAST and we were imagining Hinata as a violent bad ass who had the mouth of a sailor hehe. Perhaps Hinata isn't always so sweet!

"You are wet."
Oh, and he did not just state the obvious!

Sassy Sakura, he went there. *z-snap* hehe. Sassy Sakura is always enjoyable to read. Even if she didn't voice her thoughts outloud, it's still hilarious because I can just imagine Sakura's incredulous facial expression to Itachi's comment. And is that Itachi flirting? Hehe. Are you also enjoying the view Itachi?

It was completely unfair that he could look like he had just stepped out of a shower while reeking of masculine appeal whereas she felt about as attractive as a half-drowned rat.

I know Sakura, I'm jealous too. The sooner we accept that Itachi is always fabulous, regardless of the circumstances, the easier it'll be for both of us. It's also a nice character development part, Sakura's unconscious attraction to Itachi starting. This part also reminds me of a scene from Crazy, Stupid Love. The part with Emma Stone and Ryan Gosling and Emma says, "Seriously?! It's like you're photoshopped!" in rxn to Ryan's abs hahaha.

"And please pray tell why did you not seek treatment right away since you were already there?" Her voice was so saccharine sweet now that it was completely intimidating coupled with that extremely scary look on her face. Naruto would have been peeing in his pants by now, Sai would have kept his big mouth shut for once and Sasuke would have kept himself as inconspicuous as possible.

Is that Sakura's impression of Yamato?! Haha! I loved the descriptions of Team 7's rxns to Sakura. It made me laugh and I could just imagine them backing away from Sakura quickly with faces.

And he sounded perfectly rational of course, as if he truly believed what he was saying.

Of course Itachi is rational; of course Itachi believes in what he says. Of course. Hahaha, it was a nice touch. It subtly showcases how Sakura views Itachi and his mightier than thou vibe.

She didn't seem to notice that she had just commanded the esteemed Uchiha heir to do menial chores and he said nothing about it either.

Sakura Haruno had not just tamed one Sasuke Uchiha, but also one Itachi Uchiha, the clan heir!

Sakura prayed inwardly for the strength to at least make it into her apartment before she collapsed. Then a much more important thought occurred to her. "Remember to clean the floor; I don't want my landlady on my back again."

Getting inside her apartment before fainting making sure her floor is clean and it is Itachi Uchiha, clan heir, who cleans it. Nice priorities Sakura. You sure put Itachi on a guilt trip and made sure there was no way he could refuse doing menial chores.

Besides, Sakura really didn't think that she was his type.

That sounds like denial Sakura. You also aren't denying that you're attracted to Itachi, you just don't think he sees you that way. It's a nice hint of what is to come Anna, it's really subtle as well but it does its job.

Is the setting, the thunderstorm, perhaps a metaphor for their relationship? Volatile yet exciting and beautiful? Or perhaps Sakura and Itachi's inner turmoil on their feelings for each other?

Thank you for the great read!
soph chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
Great as always
Nostalgic Beauty chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Aww! Itachi got under Sakura's guard. I can't wait to see what happens!
Traumaddict chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Summary of the end of the story:
Itachi-chan smiles.
Sakura's brain cells explode.
feebeechan.harunouchiha chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
This is good! :3 I love it!
Skyrere chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
hehehe... very nice. I love it.
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