|Reviews for Pokemon Colosseum: Shadow of the Day|
| Champion Tasume chapter 5 . 3/28/2009
Awesome story so far... Some grammar problems though. Some advice, make sure you check your tenses.
Three on three would be kinda overdoing it. Besides, not enough room on the screen. You'd have to seriously shrink the sprites.
If they made a movie, they'd destroy the sanctity that is Colossuem.
| shadowsaver chapter 4 . 6/16/2008
poor Pikcahu it dosent seem to be his or Ash's day.
| LordApocolypse-End of Days chapter 3 . 4/17/2008
Make 1 of the reasons Pikachu is a shadow the Red orb!
| Tri-Emperor of The Twilight chapter 3 . 4/12/2008
| snintendog chapter 2 . 3/22/2008
this one dang good fan fiction the chapter are at a good size but there are only a couple spelling problems is spelled brock you just need to put pokemon for singular or plural.
| Cem-chan chapter 2 . 3/11/2008
Woah Pikachu is a shadow! Didn't see that coming. But its so friendly. Maybe Rui made a mistake. Please update soon.
(Isn't Broke spelled Brock?)
| darkness in light54 chapter 2 . 3/10/2008
| shadowsaver chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
That was good but how will The Champion of Kanto be able to deffet the saver of the Orr regon..I wonder. what are you planning any way? I can tell that this is going to be a real interesting story.