|Reviews for Vision Of A Lifetime|
| emeralda363 chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
I, too, agree that Mr. Whitlock is VERY sexy.
| Fogs of Gray chapter 8 . 7/4/2011
Oh my... I want more. I love the way it went, but I need more. So, keep writing, because I'm anxiously waiting.
Fogs of Gray
| MyRedvines chapter 3 . 5/29/2011
| Vamp chapter 8 . 8/6/2010
Sorry, I forgot to actually review! What am I like? I love this story and the final chapter was the very best part. Very sexy. It's a sign of a good writer when you can do an M-rated lemon and keep it both hot and sweet without turning the chapter into descriptive porn. Bravo to you!
| Vamp chapter 8 . 8/5/2010
(Your Worshipfulness) Don't be so petantic! You sound like a teacher. Like BookMe said, she got her ideas from books, and this is what those stories are like. Besides, maybe she did use a bit of creative licence, but that was only to make the story more interesting. How boring would this story have been if there was no difficulty in Alice and Jasper marrying? Yes, Sophie's motivations were quite mercurial, but the writer did say that this story was written as she went along. Sue her for having to change certain things at short notice to make the story work!
| sperky7220 chapter 8 . 6/23/2010
i really liked this story, you did a great job at keeping them in the past area, im working on my own story at home but i just cant seem to keep it feeling like their in a diffrent era lol... I think it would be really intresting to see how alice meeting their family would be in that era especially scince this time jasper is leding them there
| ThatBand chapter 8 . 12/29/2009
This story is really good. I loved it and can't wait to read more! :)
| kyrandiana chapter 8 . 10/31/2009
Tis good u should do an epiloge having the brandons be worried have Alice be pregnant by her first time with jasper idk have her parents not be able to find them
| SilverLunarStar chapter 8 . 5/1/2009
Wow, this was nicely written. I love reading about this era as well. For someone who doesn't like history, I became completely addicted to Historical Romances. Especially Mary Balogh...
I love how you included the rest of the Cullens in the end.
| SilverLunarStar chapter 7 . 5/1/2009
Wow, they're so morbid...
I like Sophie! May she find much happiness in the future!
See, Alice, see? He hasn't forgotten about you!
I'm a bit saddened that the next chapter is the last one...
| SilverLunarStar chapter 6 . 5/1/2009
Hahaha! That disclaimer was brilliant!
Ah! That no-good b*st*rd! Trying to lay his paws on Alice! Gr...
Yay for Jasper in saving Alice!
(Oh, thank you Sophie!)
No for Jasper in him leaving.
Contradicting that, such a smart man.
Think Alice! Think! He wouldn't leave you unless he has a plan up his sleeve to come back for you!
| SilverLunarStar chapter 5 . 5/1/2009
*sighs* Totally adorable!
*gulps* I hope Sophie really won't say anything!
| SilverLunarStar chapter 4 . 5/1/2009
Oh no! This is so messed up!
Why, oh why? (
Just when Jasper and Alice...
*rushes off to find out Jasper's reaction*
| SilverLunarStar chapter 3 . 5/1/2009
Ack! I almost panicked when I read that Jasper had thrown Alice's hand off!
Thankfully, he had a good reason! _
Hm... when will she find out his first name, I wonder? She keeps referring to him as "Mr. Whitlock." It's still adorable, though!
| SilverLunarStar chapter 2 . 5/1/2009
Aw that was so sweet!