Reviews for Torn Apart World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! What a story, gutted that the last chapters haven't quite made it, as I'd love to see Harry's birthday surprise and see this end on a complete high. But I've been gripped the whole way through. Some if it was hard to read, and stirred up some deep emotion, and a few tears certainly fell, but to me that's the makings of an awesome story, one that sucks you in and you feel like you really feel the characters feelings. I really hope that this can be finished even though it's been many years, but even if not you can roughly see where and how it was to end. Thanks again for a awesome read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will Snape be nice towards Harry later on? Im drawn into this book. Its really good, im enjoying it so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() What do you have planned, i wonder? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far its good. I cant say much as i havent gotten far into it, but it caught my attention |
![]() ![]() Wine? He needs a stiff whiskey. |
![]() ![]() I liked this fic, but Snape is so OOC that I couldn’t continue. I’m sorry, but this isn’t Snape. This is an OC with h name Snape. |
![]() ![]() This is a real nice fic. |
![]() ![]() I love situations in which Harry almost died, because the aftermath is always very seeet. |
![]() ![]() I love your descriptions of abuse. They’re very raw and heartfelt. |
![]() ![]() Poor damaged Harry. The Dursleys really were monsters. |
![]() ![]() Snape is just too out of character in this fic. It disappoints me. |
![]() ![]() I hope this won’t be slash. |
![]() ![]() This was entertaining! Snape is a bit too nice, though—he might give Harry a pain relief potion, but he wouldn’t take his glasses off or pull a blanket over him. |
![]() ![]() Snape’s very in-character, I like it. |
![]() ![]() This is a promising start! I love supportive!Hermione and Ron. |