Reviews for Torn Apart World
Guest chapter 17 . 10/12/2019
OK I am no longer on the edge of a cliff I jumped down into the canyon and somehow I am now on the other side!

what a roller-coaster ride ok I'm mixing metaphors - but enjoying your writing.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/12/2019
Oooh my what just happened in chp 14!
Aaaaaaaaah.

I am freaking out right now.
I am in shock and not sure if I should just sit with this emotion and imagine what's coming or turn to the next chapter and start reading

I love your writing and I'm right on the edge of a cliff right now.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/12/2019
You may have thought chapter 11 was boring but it was definitely not.
a fantastic way to solidify the bond between them.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/12/2019
Oh my my my I really do love what you have done with chapter 7 a work of art thank you.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/12/2019
A powerfully written chapter

Ooooff
catonmic33 chapter 2 . 9/23/2019
Very nice and well written so far. Next chapter right away :)
DarkLord935 chapter 26 . 9/13/2019
please come back
Slytherinfreak17 chapter 19 . 8/10/2019
THIS IS MAKING ME SO EMOTIONALLY EXHAUSTED...to many emotions. It’s amazing though!
Leah chapter 26 . 6/26/2019
This is the best fucking story ever... you... you didn’t finish it...nooooo... whyyyyyyyyyy
Hersheykitty3 chapter 15 . 6/17/2019
And I'm crying again. I was like, it has to be a nightmare, but you made it so real, I was wondering what Harry could do now, until the next curve ball hit. Expertly written, can't wait to keep going.
Hersheykitty3 chapter 14 . 6/17/2019
Ahh! What even?! I am actually dying right now! Why do you have to do this to me?! Ok, now time for the next chapter, and see what in the world is going on... I do love the story, regardless.
Guest chapter 26 . 4/18/2019
I HATE YOUUUUU!

YOU FILTHY BASTARD!

HoW DaRe YoU lEaVe ThE sToRy InCoMpLeTe At ThIs PoInT oF tImE !

YOU BLOODY FUCKING ARSEHOLE!

IT WAS SO GOOD AND YOU STOPPES WRITING IT !

YOU FOUL LOATHESOME EVIL LITTLE COCKROACH!
Guest chapter 14 . 4/17/2019
WTFFFFFF!

That just did not happen right!
ScotlandFaerie chapter 26 . 3/27/2019
How could you tell us that there is only one more chapter and then not post for 8 years! Come back!
Guest chapter 26 . 3/15/2019
I just- I can’t even- I so want to kill you right now!
Your Critical Reader,
Rebekah
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