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| Youtube Slut chapter 3 . 3/19/2010
| Youtube Slut chapter 9 . 1/5/2009
Wow Randy is really strong.
| wonderful.j i n x x chapter 11 . 9/12/2008
I really liked this and i look forward to reading more of your creations.
| Baxxie chapter 6 . 3/9/2008
Okay, I like this chapter, but could you please use quotation marks? It would make it so much easier to read...
| TelfordLady chapter 6 . 3/8/2008
write more please!
| TelfordLady chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
write more please!this is really good but the only thing i think would make it better is if you use quotation other than that it's really good.
| Baxxie chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
I really agree.. it's very confusing. I like the story, but It's hard to understand sometimes..
Update soon and please add '-signs!
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 5 . 3/3/2008
wow tons of kissing and hugging but really cute. i liked it
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 4 . 3/1/2008
please please please follow my advice in the last review i love your story but itd be so much clearer and easier to understand!
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 2 . 3/1/2008
ok i like it but its so annoying how you write the dialogue in the sentence. instead of typing blah blah blah emma said blah blah blah brad said blah blah blah rand said, type it like this:
"blah blah blah," brad said
"Blah blah blah" emma said.
"Blaha blah blah" randy said."
and try to refrain from using says said or says because it gets really repetitive. sorry i don't mean to be harsh but if you follow my tips your story will be smoother and easier to follow
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
oh this sounds really good!
can't wait to read it!
| JonasBigTime0916 chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
hmm this looks good.
I love Home Improvement, and I hope you continue the story.