|Reviews for Rite of Heritage|
| Luna Silvereyes chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
It's very soulful. I really like it! I can hardly wait to see what becomes of it.
And I'm honored to be in the list at the top! _
| Ghost Wulf chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
I like the beginning It sounds like it will turn out to be quite interesting. And the quote is where he said "My duty as your father comes first" Something like that line right?
Can't wait for an update!
| PsychopathicPrincess chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
i like how its going
can't wait to read the next chapter
| Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
This is interesting and intriguing! Nice touch with the Egyptology book!
Thanks for the dedication!
| Intarverbs chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
This is a good, strong start. There isn't too much that needs fixing. Keep it up. :)
The more you write, the better you'll get.