Reviews for Deception
ClockworkInsanity chapter 9 . 1/18/2014
I was listening to 30STM while I read this. What a coincidence. Heh.

Also: crYING RIGHT NOW
It was so good and then oh look a letter such tears
Xx3chibibunny chapter 9 . 11/2/2012
WHYYYYYY
WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEEE
Naire chapter 9 . 5/15/2011
god... such a good story and such a crappy ending... well, nothing's perfect. thanks for the story anyway.
sami1010220 chapter 9 . 2/14/2011
*sob* omg, i seriously almost started crying as i came to the end of L's letter. jeez, those last lines, "i wait for you...that is what i will wait for", just killed me! i was so hoping that L wouldn't die, but in a way i'm glad he didn't, because that just makes your story all the more bittersweet. you did a great job, with developing the characters and their relationships, though the chapters were a bit short. but anyway, i need to go cry now, great job again!
CallMeClandestine chapter 9 . 4/19/2009
SO SAD! oh my god. you've made me cry! because that was just so beautifully heart breaking. i really should have expected this ending, but i just found myself hoping that it would end happier. ack, i need a tissue! i'm in awe of how in character you managed to keep L and Light, when their relationship was anything but canon. i'm also very impressed by L's letter; it seriously seemed like it was written by L himself, the tone was spot-on. hope that makes sense...

in all, probably one of the most moving stories i have read in a while. my used tissues can attest to that. i love love loved all of it. even the necessary sad ending. :D
SaltwaterGarden chapter 8 . 2/10/2009
That was very pretty. The writing is wonderful and such; it's very powerful... it's really awesome. But, uh...

"dies in the arms of LIGHT YAGAMI"

He wrote his name in the death note- he would have died!

um.

I think you could put

" dies in the arms of lover/love" and have it be romantic still, I mean...

Sorry. DN die-hard nerd. -pushes up glasses-
SaltwaterGarden chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
...

Thas' GRATE.

I always wondered what would happen if someone just happened to stick their head into Light's room as he was writing in the Death Note...
Carys Langley chapter 9 . 11/11/2008
This was absolutely beautiful. I especially loved the letter that L wrote to Kira/Light at the end. So touch -sob- Congratulations on finishing.
Nekomata-sama chapter 9 . 6/17/2008
wonderful!I completely love it!amazing work!
blackmombafairy chapter 9 . 4/26/2008
omg! that was beautiful but sad. i usually hate sad stories but god i can't help but love this one. you should feel proud of yourself. stories don't ever make me cry (except when L died, i through the manga across the room and rufused to read it it till curiosity got to me lol) but any way. I was bawling when i read this. yepp yepp feel proud indeed.

Raine
Moonlit Phantasy chapter 9 . 4/6/2008
It's very nice... sad and beautiful...
Resquience chapter 9 . 4/5/2008
This is probably one of the best Death Note fics out there.

Thumbs up for standing out.
a.Arty chapter 9 . 4/4/2008
TT omg! so sad... *sobs-sobs*... but...aww true love...
Sora Ryuuzaki chapter 9 . 4/4/2008
OMG. So sorry that I couldn't review your latest chapters until today D: (see the latest chapter of "Of Yagami Light, the Mass murderer" for reason) But... SO SAD D: SO DAMN SAD. T T

I'll poll as soon as I finish reviewing ;D

Sora
K-9 Style chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Nice. I like!
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