Reviews for Power Up
It's simply me chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
That was hilarious. Nice idea!
Byebyei4gothisexisted chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
ramblingninny chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Wow. This is the first RabuKon fic I've read! :D It's so funny. So like the duo.
Afug chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
lmfao Very nice. Loved it.
singwithin chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
This was fantastic. The ending made me laugh so hard. This is totally Risa and Ootani, to a T! Definitely on my faves.
just-a-web-artist chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
LOL Otani, Otani, Otani. Think before you help prove to someone you can pick up men. XD
bghnbghn chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
oh, Otani, you would know how to pick up men. lovely job! I don't think they were really OOC. very nice job!
Bittersweet Romanticide chapter 1 . 8/2/2008

One of the funniest things I've ever read. I love the ending. Otani DOES know how to pick up boys after all! Congrats to him, and to you on your hilarious fanfic.
Sakura12 chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
haha shyt!


allie chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
so funny! loved it! loved it! loved it! riza and otani are the best! i can totally see her teasing otani like that. "now you know how to pick up men." ha ha!
sapofbks2008 chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Really nice. I love it!
Nyrihaz chapter 1 . 4/25/2008

This was cute and the end was so damn funny, hehehe.

I could totally picture their faces, and it was on character in my opinion.


Aiyanne chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
I love the ending, it really made me laugh! XD

I thought the way you wrote Koizumi & Otani was ok, I had no problems with it
Ramsey chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
That was really funny, good story!
cream tea anyone chapter 1 . 4/3/2008

very cute and funny

Risa was so in character with her utter carelessness and video game obsession, and you gave the pair of them great interaction!

keep writing

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