Reviews for Sit Upon the Frozen Heavens |
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![]() ![]() ![]() humm, It seems like when you made Naruto more powerful everyone and their mother got more powerful with him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonder if all the Konoha 12 are gonna get zanpakuto's, 4 of them already awakened one randomly so maybe. Also I think Shino should've gone on the retrieval, it was mentioned who of the other 12 were busy/incapable of going but Shino wasn't mentioned at all and forgotten about, rip him |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't like how Naruto can just cut samehada in half like that. He has to clash with other swords and even itachi can block his zanpakuto with his fingers and yet samehada, the strongest sword in Naruto arguably, just cuts cut in half like butter. The explanation for it sucked too |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hyorinamaru is Toshiro's ZanpakutÅ from Bleach btw. go read it also guest how about you get laid |
![]() ![]() Useless fic delete it useless author |
![]() ![]() You made Sasuke wield a katana useless fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well naruto's ice dragon can't seem to hit the broad side of barn, so WHY NOT teach him another STUPID DRAGON trick, that ALSO can't hit a dancing BIJUU? (after all, if it's dancing, it moves minutely to the left and then right... Which seems enough to be able to dodge these things).. These "dragon techniques" seem to be an UTTER waste of chakra or spirit energy... It doesn't help if it looks flashy, if it's so DAMN SLOW, it can't HIT anything! If your DETERMINED to keep using them... Maybe have them TRACK targets.. So they move WITH their intended targets, to still HIT THEM? And jiriaya is "still hurting" so bad from his student's death that he's just going to let that student's son FAIL, and the "child of prophcy" just screw off huh? Yup... "I got hurt, so let the world burn"? Are you SURE your not confusing EVERYONE in konoha with the uchiha clan? Then there is the SMALL problem of "anyone from konoha could NOT miss his features"? When you have EVERYONE in konoha "miss those features"... You cannot talk about how "cool ninja are" if you make them all have the IQ and emotional control of a SPOON! My advice is, don't call attention to how INADEQUATE at their OWN JOBS, the nins of konoha are. Makes it VERY difficult to see them as any more then either "villains" or "collateral, unimportant damage". |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is the worth of this "dragon" if it's SO SLOW, every single gennin(the weakest and SLOWEST of all classes) can DODGE the thing? This seems worthless. Kakashi is AN IDIOT, like MORE of an idiot then MOST times... And Ninja don't believe in fairy tales? You mean EXCEPT "summoned animals the size of buildings, that talk", "demons bent on world domination", "magical, future-seeing priestesses", "giant man-eating TREES", "time warping/traveling portals" and DRAGONS.. Because they ALL EXIST in their world.. Kakashi KNOWS FOR A FACT they exist! All authors make the characters act/believe stuff like OUR WORLD when in their world FANTASTICAL stuff is just a MATTER OF COURSE... Like saying "tv exists" in ours. He SHOULD be just thinking... "well this has SOMETHING to do with either: His lineage, the fox, BOTH, or the fact that Minato got a GOD involved in the boy's life". (I'd think as soon as a GOD got involved in ANY situation.. ALL "disbelief" is gone) |
![]() ![]() Its shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() all right what the fis everybody justgetting a these sword can't wait spell it and I can understand Hinata because maybe the exposure from Naruto healing her maybe gave it to her I guess I can see that but where the fdoes Sasuke get his like he just pulled out of his ass |
![]() ![]() So basically there was no point in hinata unlocking her zanpackto if she was going to lose you clown |
![]() ![]() ![]() uhmm not that i do not like this, but why isnt it classified as a crossover |
![]() ![]() ![]() They say this now but personally harem brings more trouble to next generation than the founding generation. 1st; who will be come clan head? Ultimately mother's will eventually want their children to get that title because it means secured future. Maybe not their generation but further down the line. Why? Because too many children that have a direct bloodline to the Founder. There's a reason why clan need to grow with time. |
![]() ![]() Excuse me is this Boi turning into sephiroth? |
![]() ![]() Stupid you ruined it. cant have your boytoy sasuke not looking cool huh |