|Reviews for The Valeyard Trilogy|
| Unknown Kadath chapter 3 . 4/3/2011
That is a brilliant idea! I love the idea of Clive/Valeyard trying to scare Rose off, and being responsible for sending her to the alternate universe. And you even explain how Pete was able to catch her at the exact right moment.
| Peregrinate chapter 3 . 5/10/2010
Oh, lol. Brilliant final line. :P
| Deltree chapter 3 . 7/1/2008
This was great. Kind of dark.
| timano chapter 3 . 3/22/2008
The cleverest explanation of just HOW Pete managed to be able to catch Rose-something I'd wondered for some time! And a story that shows the Valeyard isn't pure evil, or at least that he acts as he does for a reason.
Easily 9 out of 10 stars. Will there be a sequel?
| this account will be dead soon chapter 3 . 3/14/2008
The top stuff: **Hugs** I'll get out the ice cream and tissues.
**Slips chibi!Jack a jelly baby** ;)
| Zephyrfox chapter 3 . 3/13/2008
I kinda like this. It explains the Valeyard really well, which never happened in the old series. And I liked the Jack/Gwen. That first episode of Torchwood I said to myself that Gwen was Jack's Rose substitute, all naive eagerness. Not that Jack/Ianto isn't...interesting...
| cheri1 chapter 3 . 3/13/2008
jack/gwen! how dare you! *sics ianto after you with hockey stick* lol!
this was really good. i loved how you explained pete's catching rose being due to the valeyard's hypnosis because that part has always made me scratch my head. how did he know that she was heading towards the void at that exact moment if he was in the other universe...and for that matter, how was he able to just stand there and catch her when he had void stuff on him and should have been sucked in instantly. *scratch head*
aw, well, an awesome story! love the valeyard. he's my favorite villain. (hoping he makes another appearance in future doctor who ep.) keep writing!
| xLaramiex chapter 3 . 3/13/2008
wow. I love it! *hugs*
can I borrow chibi!Jack? hehe he will cheer me up :)
I mean jokes...
| NewDrWhoFan chapter 3 . 3/13/2008
All I can say is, wow :)
Quite the complex, unexpected chain of events!
| MythStar Black Dragon chapter 3 . 3/13/2008
Nice run Jack.
| KateCarter chapter 3 . 3/13/2008
ROFL...I was thrown there at the end by that ship that slipped in...
Nice wind-up! I enjoyed it!
And...ouch. All your Facebook bumper stickers? That's a bummer. I don't have that many, but I wouldn't want to lose them.
(have you seen the one with the picture of Churchill doing the "v for victory" thing, next to Hitler doing his whole flat-handed salute thing, and the caption "Scissors beats paper"? It's hilarious.)
| NonExistente chapter 3 . 3/13/2008
Wow. Great last chapter, very interesting! Brilliant :). ANd love the A/N at the end hehe! ;) Great work
| NewDrWhoFan chapter 2 . 3/10/2008
I think it's a fantastic way to play with the universe! Keep writing, please :)
| MythStar Black Dragon chapter 2 . 3/6/2008
That man has no luck at all with anyone.
| this account will be dead soon chapter 2 . 3/6/2008
Hmm...I like it! _