Reviews for Eight and Eighth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Everything was good until that plot twist, it kind of ruined the whole story for me I ended up just skimming the last three chapters because of it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nah. Hated the plot twist. Wasn’t so much a plot twist as a completely different story. Might have been an intriguing separate fic. But it does not go together. Loved it up until that part though. |
![]() ![]() awwwwwwwwwwwwwww i can't wait till they get to together |
![]() ![]() I’ve only just finished chapter 3 and I think it’s amazing and very well written. The plot is great, the setting, reasoning and grammar is all very well. My questions have all been answered and I think it’s very clever that you (the author) used the chamber of secrets as their dormitories. No characters are OOC so far and I really appreciate it. The relationship between hermione and draco isn’t rushed which unlike. It actually goes along with the seventh book quite well and this is the best dramione fanfic I’ve ever read so far. You truly have potential to be a writer, if that’s what you want. Most people think it’s easy to write your version of a story if it’s already set up for you starting with books 1-7, but it really isn’t because you have to create the plot and writing and dialogue. In all, very well done and keep it up. So far, I’m loving it. You’ve given me inspiration. Thanks so much! |
![]() ![]() I don't rue it, I quite like it so far. I know it's a few years late, but nevertheles Thanks for writting and posting. |
![]() ![]() Gosh, I loved this! thankx |
![]() ![]() YeSS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED this story! |
![]() ![]() omg so good i love this story i do understand why under thirteen should be cautious though |
![]() ![]() damn if i was malfoy i'd be sleeping with one eye open |
![]() ![]() i was cringing so hard i had to send a photo to my friend to read |
![]() ![]() I dont usually write reviews (what a terrible ff reader i am! I know!). But, this fic was really one of the best eighth yr/post war ffs i have read. I didnt expect the twist at the end. But i think it was for the best. I also loved how in ch 32, when hermione saw her future with draco and erm. I had a great time reading it, thanks a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Superb start. I like the uncertainty. I like how there's a bit more emotional content here than the last couple of pages of the seventh book. I know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay this was super cheesy (?) but I really enjoyed it... And I don't think the turning point was that bad. It's kinda weird and all but it really was sweet. |
![]() ![]() Happy Borthday! |