|Reviews for Suitor|
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/22/2017
I adore how you've written this story so far & hope you will come back to finish it someday. This is exactly the type of Van/Hitomi romance I've been looking for in a fanfic!
And I liked how you wrote the sex scene. I very much agree with your sentiments on the matter. Please continue
| 66ButterflyOfDarkness99 chapter 1 . 8/18/2017
Ok. I'm going to start with this one but let me tell you that I've just spent this whole week reading your fanfics...so here we go...
wholly sh**! AMAZING! Escaflowne and 1800 London period setting? SUPERB! Your writing skills...your dark Van...I LOVED IT. I know it's been 4 years since your last update, but please tell me if you ever plan to finish this because I just NEED to know what's gonna happen when Van realizes Hitomi's secret...
| nofreakingway chapter 9 . 2/8/2017
This story is beautiful! I absolutely love it! It's written so SO well and I really love the 1800 period setting! The love scene was very tasteful and beautiful as well. Their character development is fantastic and I'm just desperate to know how this concludes! Please please don't abandon this story! I HAVE TO KNOW!
| delight046 chapter 9 . 11/23/2016
I just wanted to let you know that I love this story, and even though it's like... 3 years since you've updated this fic...I still can't wait to read the end. XD
I know...life happens. Gotta have your priorities in order, pursue some awesome dreams! But If you forgot about this fic, just consider this review a little reminder that you still have someone reading your fantastic work! :D
Hope life is treating you well! 3
| Maaya chapter 9 . 9/12/2016
One of the best stories I've read here - the language you are using is simply beautiful. Can't wait an update - there will be one for sure, right? :) it can not end like this, just can not ...
| Ala chapter 9 . 5/16/2016
I'm in love with this story :) You have showed the development of the both characters very good, the change in them and in their fealings. The tension between them kills me ;) The last scene is everything you've wanted - it's everything you have wanted it to be and it's real, beautiful, a bit of desparate and endearing.
I'm glad that there is still hope you will update it :)
| Teehanu chapter 9 . 5/15/2016
There is still hope you will update one day, right? Love the story, the way you make them both change, the tension between them, their friendship. The last scene is everything you wanted it to be - it's simple, yet beautiful, endearing.
| Wild Cat 214 chapter 9 . 4/8/2016
Why haven't you continuednthe
| SuperSegovia123 chapter 8 . 4/1/2016
IM CRYING BC I LITERALLY JUST GOT HERE AND YOU HAVENT UPDATED IN YEARS.
MY POOR SOUL. BEAUTIFUL STORY. I'm so engrossed in it! I LOVE YOU.
| AviatorJane chapter 9 . 2/9/2016
It's been some years since I first started reading this fanfiction. I re-read it tonight and I must say that I absolutely love it. You have great talent for writing and if you ever write a book I want to read it.
| BelleIllumina chapter 9 . 9/20/2015
Please. Update. Like. I just remembered to read this again and I am weeping because I long for this. I and I can't just let this go.
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/29/2015
I ADORE this story. I was literally binge reading till 3am until I fell asleep. You've really captured the emotions of yout characters really well. Hitomi's story (the loss of her mother and ignorance of her father and how its shaped her) is heartbreaking and written very well. I appreciate Chid's presence in many ways; I like that it is he and not Allen that is close with Van; Chid and Van's relationship is special because there is this emotional understanding between them. Chid also looks out for Van and is straight with him when Van can't be honest with himself. Also is Chid making the moves on Hitomi so Van realizes want he truly wants/loves? Or does he really fancy Hitomi? It seems the two lovebirds believe they are unworthy of being loved which makes it all more tragic and compelling. I've probably written too much but I absolutely love this story. Its hitting that 2 year mark. Update soon? Best wishes!
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/29/2015
| Timbre chapter 9 . 6/3/2015
Though I realize it's been quite a while since you've updated, please do so! I wanna see what happens next! Love the English gentry flavor you have this as a whole.
| dinkycharlie chapter 9 . 1/30/2015
Wow.. It first I kinda didn't like the story because of the topic.. U know.. Problems because of social status blabla ... But I kept reading and you got me! You developed such great characters and your writing skills are amazing! One can feel the desire and desperation through your words! And it doesn't sound cheesy or weird or anything else! I'm so excited to know why Hitomi inherited everything from her father and if she is willing to except it! I hope you will soon pick up writing again! Since it's 2015 almost two years already passes by.. So it's time to update again! Haha! Love, charlie