|Reviews for Types of Coercion|
| Unices chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
I've been meaning to write a story like this but I could never write it well without it turning to mushy! Thank You a story like this needed to be put up! XD I' m hyper on life
| Ferb O. Oche chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
oh my, its so beautiful!
i love it!~
| yumi-maki chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Ah, that was cute. I do believe tht Ms. Temari would have very pretty handwriting - I'm sure she'd have gotten an A in penmanship class. Well, this was VERY funny, especially the beginning where you recount how everyone, particularly Ino tried to manipulate him into quitting. I also love Temari's attitude about it and the fact that she was the one who made him quit. How typically Temari. Gaara trying to pass the blame off onto Kankurou (for reading the letter) was SO CUTE!
It was quite well written, I think - no worries.
| beerbelly chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
that was great! _ i really love it! i can't hardly wait for you to type up your old stories and post it up.
| coeur de lyon chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
It's brilliant :D
I love the way you portray Temari and Shikamaru, this was awesome
| extraordinaire chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Aw! That was so cute! Great job! And it seems so true that Temari would be the one to stop Shikamaru from smoking.
| The Known and Unknown chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Sque! I've always wondered if Shikamaru actually managed to succesfully quit smoking.
You should write another story continuing this one, at the Konoha fest!